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White-Horse Promises ( inspired by Lori Moore's Two Ku)
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... Hope you don't mind, Lori! :)) Bear with me... I had surgery last Friday and am still recuperating from the general anaesthetic (nothing too drastic, no worries!) Major complaint (apart from fatigue) right now is a bad throat owing to all the intubation - hence the associations I guess. But thanks, Lori, for getting my pen off it's sick bed... Hope to be back to normal (normal??!!) just asap. Kate xx


white-capped waves
rolling into themselves –
promises

Lori L Moore, 29.6.09.



WHITE-HORSE PROMISES

ceaseless cascade
of moon-ruffled waves,
silk-wrapped sheets
foetally-curled,
sshh-ing baby-soft whispers
tumbling heels over head;

souvenirs of some
satin-slippered night;
untucked shirt-tails
streaming the length
of ivory-slit envelopes
s.w.a.l.k.’d by valentines;

cloven-footed centaurs,
bronco-backed, foaming
in slow-mo stampede,
rearing Arab-esques
chafing bridle and bit…


I bite my lip. Sip,
savour, swallow;
savour, swallow, sip;

wade into readiness,
wallow in waiting…


As smooth stone placed
beneath parched tongue
slakes hot thirst,
waters sourceless mouth
on a dry and barren shore

so, too, pregnant promises
saturate the mind,
swell the silent throat with
their succulent suspense.

 

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 Reviews of "White-Horse Promises ( inspired by Lori Moore's Two Ku)"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
You write exceptionally well under anesthesia, Kate. A thoroughly enticing poem, vivid imagery and vibrant language. Thank you as well for sharing Lori's haiku. It is brilliant and so is your poem. :-)

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
I see why her poem inspired you. Your imagery is fantastic. It seems to evolve throughout the poem. I saw those waves, and then there was a developing dry feel. Hope you recover well. Been there, this time last year with my back surgery. Hugs and happy 4th of July,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
very creative work-glad you are okay

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
a wave even in its most smoothest form create turbulence ... we wait to observe the intensity of its suspenseful arrival ... sometimes it can be deceiving or unforeseen ... whatever the level of its force, it is always inevitable ... thought provoker ... feel better ... keep out of bed and keep letting those poetry bugs bite ;)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
Kate, I look forward to seeing you "back to normal"--and in the
meantime I'll continue to read and learn from such marvelous works
as White-Horse Promises. -gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
I love this one dear Kate as you feed off another brilliant write to shoot images all through our mind and emotions running through our hearts. Lines are strong and passion deep. Hope you feel better soon.
hugs
Pops

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
Even when ill, your Muse serves you well, Kate. Hope you feel much better soon, and if your old Dad had known, he would have sent a Get Well Card!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
A Soul has this writer...............

Walt

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Very fine write. D*** fairy-tales. Hope you recuperate nicely, Kate. Don't overdue, now...

Lin

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

A wonderful write Kate.
Hope you are back on your feet full swing soon.
Great to recup with pen in hand though.

All the best and take care,
Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
"wade into readiness,
wallow in waiting"… love these lines.... superb poem...may you be up and running around soon Kate!!!
Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
You are a wonder! Love what you did with your inspiration;-) Splendid...I pray the worst is behind you ,and recovery
is 100% soon! Sorry I wasn't aware of this. Take care...Eileen

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Beware of messengers on white horses. Glad the white-capped waves could be a tool. Wonderful write. I hope you're feeling better soon.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
my god.....
you wrote this sick???
its beautiful and haunting.......you are my favorite kate

be well........anita

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Kate,
Beautifully blended personal and natural experiences and states.
Get well, Kate, very well!
John

Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Glad you are on the mend; sorry to hear you were in hospital and had to go under the knife! Hope you will feel better soon; you are ever in my prayers/thoughts! Well penned, Kate!

(((Gentle Hugs))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
So glad to hear you are recovering well and while you won't be singing any aria's I know your voice will return to normal soon. Great poem.

Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Wow! I love this, Kate. I especially like those last two words: "succulent suspense." Powerfully done!

Reviewed on June 30, 2009
(((Kate))),

So sorry to hear you were under. Literally. A scary feeling, but you wrap the throat and body in soothing lines (poetic sheets) of comfort. Well done, my friend. If you need anything, you let me know, 'hear?!?

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
...IF YOU BUILD IT...THEY WILL COME ESPECIALLY WHEN YOU GOT THE SAVOUR, SWALLOW, SIP...HELP.(SMILE) GREAT WRITE WITH VERY GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
This definitely reminded me of too many times of coming out of anesthesia...the parched throat and ice chips that really don't help anything at all...
Sorry to hear you have been under the weather. I hope you feel better soon. :~)

The last stanza brought to mind totally different images...ones of the longing and anticipation that slowly drive a person mad in waiting and waiting for the promise to finally be fulfilled...

Cryssa


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