For some strange reason, I have had the line "I warm her pearls" keep coming into my head over the past few days. It, of course, has taken me to the very well-known (at least here in the UK!) and accomplished poem by our new Poet Laureate, Carol Ann Duffy, so I freely acknowledge that this work is "tipping my hat" to hers. :)) xx
PEARLS
Their greying noose about my neck:
my Mistress’s pearls she bids me warm –
sullen moons and burned-out
stars obsolete of glory, cold
as her glacial heart.
Her own plump throat they choke,
tight as the conjugal band
which bites fleshiness of finger.
It’s I who own their heat,
I who supplement her lack,
heed milky stains and smooth
to silk the roughness of cold sheets,
the warmth of my slender body
alone filling the Master’s bed.
Her funereal heartwood’s ebony,
mine living as the rosewood
in which her beads are laid to rest.
She is all red berry of rage,
sleek barb of polished holly;
I am dulled-white mistletoe,
mute joy of mulled wine and
sustaining, cloying sweetmeats
for bone-chilled, weary days.
I the Master’s Christmas,
his gift free-given, soft-ploughed
and handsomely yielded
from her frozen, stony ground;
I her worthless treasure and
his pearl of great price.
The third verse blew me away, Kate. That's my favorite part, but I also really liked your metaphors in the last few verses. Wonderful poetry. Hugs,
Sheila
This immediately makes me think of "the other woman"-- how he woos the one who warms him, while married to the codfish with the thick neck and heart-- such a waste of pearly wonders cast from swine to hands who would appreciate them.
My favorite lines: "my Mistress’s pearls she bids me warm" and "his gift free-given, soft-ploughed"... that farming term very much appeals to me. It conjures up all sorts of warm and fertile feelings.
But most of all, I love this for the lyrical quality it has. It sounds like a nursery song, like "Sing a Song of Six Pence" . It has a sense about it that could mean different things for everyone, as seen from the comments below.
(and I love how lines cling to your mind until you free them! ...you've such a poetic little muse!)
TRUE BEAUTY IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER AND APPARENTLY, FOR SOME, SO IS TRUE WORTH...DUAL PURPOSES...EVEN UNDER THE SAME ROOF. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Subtle metaphors and strong comparisons hidden among the lines of this beauty...
My favorite lines are the last two.
Your poem made me think about how often I overlook the gems in others and see only rough edges, and would want to throw them away in pursuit of other more seemingly favorable traits...yet for a lack of polish, it may be that those I would so readily pass by are those that hold the greatest treasure and would be my closest friends...
Dear sweet Kate, when I read this I read it with an open mind and an open heart which I do with all the gifts you so graciously offer us here on the den. I always light up when I see a posting by you for I know it will be something special and you did not dissappoint me with this one for sure. Pearls warms the heart, titiliates the soft senualities and using sublte metaphors exercises the brain. I can only agree with the other reviews sweet Kate...this is a masterpiece...
big hugs
Kate, perhaps the most precious pearls necklace is the one made with tender kisses.
"Pearls" as a poem and a tribute deserves its own mother-of-pearl shell.
Kate, There is magic in your words, "pearls" is a gem of a poem. You must listen to Sade's song entitled "Pearls", it is the most beautiful heart tearing song I have ever heard. Donna Summer heard it in an airport and called Sade up immediately and asked her if she could cover it for her next concert. She sang it here in Connecticut, but I love Sade's version the best. It starts out like this: "There is a woman in Somalia, scraping for pearls on the roadside, there's a force stronger than nature, keeps her will alive..." It is an amazing song, let me know what you think of it. You can go on youtube and call it up and listen..
till later, my dear friend, peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
You stepped out of the den and into higher dimensions with this gem Kate! I believe you are ready to have your ame right up there with
Carol Ann Duffy etc!
What a poem. For some reason this reminds me of the series "Upstairs, Downstairs," and I would love to see it again. The servant girl and the master has been connected throughout the ages. There is, of course the servant boy and the mistress also. I thoroughly enjoyed this offering my English friend.
Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
The two George's here are in agreement. Fine and polished work.
Kate,
May we all tip our hats to you,,,this is my all time favorite, I am awed and you can not file this, it is too great, Maya Angelo is one of my favorite poets and I am telling you,,,go go go, like George says, exposure!
Love,Christine
England has always produced some of the finest poets, the King being Sheakspeare, but you being inspired by England's newest Laureate has added to your luster as one not too far behind her with your gifted poetry that just needs more exposure. Excellent write.
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also have that feel. All leading to the contrast of,
It’s I who own their heat,
I who supplement her lack,
Enjoyed as always. - David
Sheila
very interesting! Thank for sharing and for caring.
Much love
Always!!
' Never cast pearls before a swine '. How true is that Kate
Take care
Jerry
BTW, I'm no longer in the NJ/New York area. I moved back to New Orleans two years ago.
My favorite lines: "my Mistress’s pearls she bids me warm" and "his gift free-given, soft-ploughed"... that farming term very much appeals to me. It conjures up all sorts of warm and fertile feelings.
But most of all, I love this for the lyrical quality it has. It sounds like a nursery song, like "Sing a Song of Six Pence" . It has a sense about it that could mean different things for everyone, as seen from the comments below.
(and I love how lines cling to your mind until you free them! ...you've such a poetic little muse!)
My favorite lines are the last two.
Your poem made me think about how often I overlook the gems in others and see only rough edges, and would want to throw them away in pursuit of other more seemingly favorable traits...yet for a lack of polish, it may be that those I would so readily pass by are those that hold the greatest treasure and would be my closest friends...
Your writing always makes me think...
Cryssa
big hugs
pops
"Pearls" as a poem and a tribute deserves its own mother-of-pearl shell.
Georg
till later, my dear friend, peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Carol Ann Duffy etc!
This is beyond lustre of pearl, this sparkles diamond and it enriches and warms and encourages all who enter its beauty.
John
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
May we all tip our hats to you,,,this is my all time favorite, I am awed and you can not file this, it is too great, Maya Angelo is one of my favorite poets and I am telling you,,,go go go, like George says, exposure!
Love,Christine
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D X0X0X0X0