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Still Life
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I added this photo to my previous Dylan Thomas write as well... it's his "boathouse", his writing shed in Laugharne, South Wales. xx


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STILL LIFE


A still life, missing something
– an object: me, I think.

So this is what it’s like,
your room, when I’m not in it:

an undisclosed space,
a nod and a wink
between ceiling and floor;
a shake of hands
between windows and door;

welcome relief from weathered
assault, yet still the wind rafts
ghostly curtains as if to rid
the walls of dreams.

Unaccountably, light has not
detected me, travels instead
straight through my presence
to assure the bed, the table,
of their meaningful existence.

It imparts to the mirror a bold,
epiphanic instant; blesses
the brass with firey awakening
and bids a framed dusty road
come alive and be travelled.

Each is convinced of its weight
in the world – except your shadow
as it stands, hands on hips,
exhaling sighs,

absorbed in the outdoor cloak of night,
measuring distance between stars,
its light-headed pulse counting beats
in the bar of our favourite song.

So which of us is here?

For all our ground-breaking advances,
the tragedy of absence has never
been eradicated or transformed;

but this is still life
and I am still breathing.
I think.



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 Reviews of "Still Life"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
For all our ground-breaking advances,
the tragedy of absence has never
been eradicated or transformed;

These verses and the whole poem gave me pause for reflection as your poems always do, Kate. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
As Jude says below, Simply breath-taking poetry. I have read this twice and I am speechless. (That takes a lot!)lol
I love how you ended this poem, it captures the essence of it's core.
You touched a piece of my soul with this one, Kate my friend, and I am again, filled with awe of your writing talent.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
STILL LIFE...ONE HAS TO ADMIT THAT EVEN LIFE THAT IS 'STILL'... IS 'STILL' LIFE. SO, OUR ABSENCE FROM THE PICTURE DOES NOT CHANGE THAT AND THIS IS A WONDERFUL DELVING INTO THE BEAUTY OF 'STILL LIFE'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Kate, I think that Dylan himself would have raised a glassto this
"epiphanic instant"... I share the admiration of your many readers.
-gene.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
I felt my own lungs fill adn waited to exhale upon reaching your last line. In quiet, damp solitude you honor a spirit with your heart.
Very beautiful.

Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
Abstract. Reality. Thought-provoking. The list goes on, yet, the most striking stanza [for me] is

"For all our ground-breaking advances,
the tragedy of absence has never
been eradicated or transformed;"

to me, this speaks of death, but the memories - thank God that we have them and they give life.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
"For all our ground-breaking advances, the tragedy of absence has never been eradicated or transformed;" And it will never be. The last six lines of this poem, cause my heart to ache. You are as amazing and fresh as ever.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on November 14, 2009
And I agree with the others in what each say. But this poem also made me think of my space and weight in the world. Is it for naught or does it have a real purpose? Am I important, or just an another ant in the colony? When a poem makes me think like this Kate it is a good thing. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
Well crafted. And I love this image:

welcome relief from weathered
assault, yet still the wind rafts
ghostly curtains as if to rid
the walls of dreams.

Emotionally provocative work, Kate. :-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
you are quite animated in this poem, your presence is breath-taking as well enduring ... your perception of stillness is in motion ... the imagery and ambiance powerfully captures a continuing moment ...

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
A beautiful flow in this poem. You captivated me. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 12, 2009
wow....blows me away...I love this one!

Reviewed on November 12, 2009
Stunning poem Kate, bringing scene and emotions to life.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
"the tragedy of absence.."
covered a lot of ground in this exquisit write, kate.
it is always such a pleasure to read your work.
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Awesome work Kate! Karen V. said it for me,yet, every line is meaningful! Kudo's!

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Great beginning and energy in those first nine lines! Then your poem goes deeper and deeper, it's like a journey to another dimension. Your question "So which of us is here?" is what seems to call the reader back to the present time. But what exactly is presence? Your last three lines make use of words and actions that are linked to this concept: stillness, breathing, living, thinking... What kind of mirror can show real presence, I wonder. Actually, I think I have an answer: poetry!?



Axilea


Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Through ghostly eyes I see the absence and it is beautiful. Patrick

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
the s.light introspection of yearning for something......greater.....better....more real.....surreality.. .. and Dylan's abode??? im just exploding with jealousy :}
the way this unveils and illuminates a thoughtfulness, a spectre of vision and revision. .. . pounctuated by all those blurry lines of images past and present. ..
such an intimate knowing and scape.
visited by ghosts of poets past.....
whispers of realms un.known and barely airily t/here.

so soft.

so inspired.

}{-----
ness

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
"but this is still life
and I am still breathing."

You may be, but the depth of your poetry leaves me breathless.

~W~

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Kate, you have opened a portal and permited us to view still life's nuances -- is it or is it not the abject gray that surrounds the very aura of being -- or has illusion again won the battle for reality? -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
Poets are the only ones that know where the door is and how to slam it shut to get alone with their inner feelings.
Poets are also the ones that can look into a mirror with a hole in the middle and see the reflection of what to come.

Georg


Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
a beautiful write enjoyed it very good indeed

Reviewed on November 10, 2009
Beautiful! I agree with Karen on the phrase below.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
this is esquisite poetry, i love the lines: "absorbed in the outdoor cloak of night, measuring distance between stars,"

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
It just keeps getting better and better. Wonderful poetry.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
Captivating write from the introduction to the closing sweet Kate. It is amazing how we as writers tend to need a "special" place where we can sulk and lick our wounds when our muses refuse to give up the seed of our dreams in words. You grabbed not only the descriptive of the scene but you also managed to correl and show us a little of the heart and soul that resides there...
hugs
Pops

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
"Each is convinced of its weight / in the world – except your shadow / as it stands, hands on hips, / exhaling sighs," Outstanding visual here. Beautiful

When you write a poem from a photograph, you don't miss much do you? I have read you fro quite some time now and I have found that you are meticulous and demanding of yourself in the poetical world. Which is exactly why so many people love to come here and sample your words, I being among your many fans.

Reviewed on November 10, 2009
Kate,

Undone by the power, the emotion in these painted lines of still life that move the soul - gorgeous.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
Kate,
This is delve and search for truth and feeling that are dear to you
and very personal; the setting is highly charged and atmospheric. Yes!

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
You are breathing alright Kate by reading those words you have written, there is much life in you. A great write dear Kate.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
"welcome relief from weathered
assault, yet still the wind rafts
ghostly curtains as if to rid
the walls of dreams."
If I may borrow a word from you and our sweet Andy Turner: "Blimey!" This is wonderful writing. I love it all - the concept, the inspiration, the philosophy, the words. And, you're the only other human I've ever known to use the word "epiphanic" other than me. In admiration ~

Reviewed on November 10, 2009
Good one, Kate; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love from America, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D


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