Oh, Kate, this one is so sensually gorgeous!!! I love the stanza She walks with their rhythm swinging softly through her hips...When you truly are connected it is as if at the hip...Cradling a loved one's head in your lap, is so comforting and sensual at the same time. You have sparked the seeds of love in me with your words, where is my prince charming and why isn't he laying in my lap...lol
Nicely done and this one is truly magnifico! Ciao Bella, keep on writing you are getting better and better every day!
Ah... I love it! So many different hidden metaphors here... but they all sing the song that is near and dear to my heart. I think this has to be my favorite of this month's writes.
Glad I couldnt give birth, though before I went in the hospital I looked as though I was pregnant...now I am just growing back some love handles...good write & don't listen to those that give bad reviews especially if they don't write anything themselves yet...Ed
Well you did it just when I thought you had reached your best you pull another out of your active mind that brings up images of mothers and motherhood everywhere. You captured the essence of woman with soft pastel strokes of humanity...well done Kate.
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Carole~
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
John
Nicely done and this one is truly magnifico! Ciao Bella, keep on writing you are getting better and better every day!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Bless you and your mama heart,
Cryssa
Newfie hugs, Rose
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