This one makes me smile... I see so much of my own life within it. I love your always subtle play on words... content/contentment. My favorite lines are those which talk of papering over cracks, like love... What a beautiful description of what love really is/does.
Thanks for sharing your unique perspective...
Cryssa :)
You have learned much. Contentment is a state of mind that is so accessible given the chance, and the smiling pint for the road, icing on life's cake. Well done. Patrick
Contentment, most of all,
is a room with you and I
both in it –
I love the way you describe one's "space" and how two can be happy within their own "space" and how the two can still be one... ...at least, that's what your verses say to me. Very nicely done, Kate. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
You remain one of the top few here at AD. You are a poet.
I like this one...it expresses a level of contentment and serenity in a relationship that few readily attain and still retain love. So far of all this months offerings this is one my favorties. You defiantely made a great showing this month...congrats my friend.
fee
Very sweet *o) I especially love the play on words. Here's my effort to break it all apart: Con= means "with" or in other words, the two of you together; Tent= that's your space, where you make your bed and lie in it--lie as in lie down, not prevaricate; and Ment= that just means you're meant for each other. --Charlie
Maybe you can teach me that contentment as well...maybe I will have it if a job that is about to interview me also hires me...appt to interview is Wednesday...Ed
Ah the elusive bird of happiness lands where ever it can find a home. And who cannot enjoy the last of a half full glass as much as the first half. I'm content with that. Smiles to you little Princess, from across our ocean divide.
Thanks for sharing your unique perspective...
Cryssa :)
Georg
Nicely done once again my friend...back to sewing Arabian night costumes.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
is a room with you and I
both in it –
I love the way you describe one's "space" and how two can be happy within their own "space" and how the two can still be one... ...at least, that's what your verses say to me. Very nicely done, Kate. Love and best wishes,
Regis
fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
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