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NaPoWriMo - 26
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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I am at last learning
contentment –

that is to say,
whatever the content,

it is neither less
nor more than it
should be, and
somewhere in between.

Depending whether
the glass is half full
or half empty,

its contents are
varied and squeezed,
like time,

or spread out wide
to paper over cracks,
like love.

Contentment, most of all,
is a room with you and I
both in it –

you liking yours with space
enough to breath,
me needing mine to be
as close a fit as possible:

in other words,
the welcoming Bar
where our world is
slowly put to rights,

drinks are always half full
and there’s still time left
at the end of the night

for one smiling
pint for the road…



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 Reviews of "NaPoWriMo - 26"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 30, 2010
glee until the hammer of reality falls with sharp repercussions -- peace and love be always with you my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 28, 2010
This one makes me smile... I see so much of my own life within it. I love your always subtle play on words... content/contentment. My favorite lines are those which talk of papering over cracks, like love... What a beautiful description of what love really is/does.

Thanks for sharing your unique perspective...
Cryssa :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 27, 2010
Learning Contentment - what a marvelous thing to learn.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 27, 2010
Contentment...until the hammer hits the thumb...

Georg


Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
You have learned much. Contentment is a state of mind that is so accessible given the chance, and the smiling pint for the road, icing on life's cake. Well done. Patrick

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Yes the eternal optimist, I like the glass half full especially a pint of good cold ale...

Nicely done once again my friend...back to sewing Arabian night costumes.

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
I think this is lovely!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Contentment, most of all,
is a room with you and I
both in it –

I love the way you describe one's "space" and how two can be happy within their own "space" and how the two can still be one... ...at least, that's what your verses say to me. Very nicely done, Kate. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
You remain one of the top few here at AD. You are a poet.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
I like this one...it expresses a level of contentment and serenity in a relationship that few readily attain and still retain love. So far of all this months offerings this is one my favorties. You defiantely made a great showing this month...congrats my friend.
fee

Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Wonderful writing, Kate; very nice! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Beautiful kate as I like to think I am contented with life as it is with my cup always 1/2 full.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
I like how this poem unraveled, Kate. A distinct feel of fate. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Very sweet *o) I especially love the play on words. Here's my effort to break it all apart: Con= means "with" or in other words, the two of you together; Tent= that's your space, where you make your bed and lie in it--lie as in lie down, not prevaricate; and Ment= that just means you're meant for each other. --Charlie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
relaxed wise Kate here settling for what has to be settled for..

John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Maybe you can teach me that contentment as well...maybe I will have it if a job that is about to interview me also hires me...appt to interview is Wednesday...Ed

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 26, 2010
Ah the elusive bird of happiness lands where ever it can find a home. And who cannot enjoy the last of a half full glass as much as the first half. I'm content with that. Smiles to you little Princess, from across our ocean divide.

GeorgeXX


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