So many forms of quiet. I love the outdoors frosty night type. Our home in the Mark Twain forest can be so quiet at night I find myself making noise for a sanity check. I guess that's a little sad isn't it? Patrick
I like the 'tight' bursts of imagery in this piece. Makes me feel like time is ticking by. And I love the memorable last line. Nicely done. Hugs,
Sheila
Mood shaped within the personal form of quiet we arrange to reflect not with regrets, but with the gusto of promise. We each snuggle in our own renditions of psychological comfort, in accord with the soul. When you are quiet, you scribe the most wonderful expressions Kate. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael shhhhh
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2010
Kate, Metaphoric and quiet without a crowd.
Always,
Deborah
A new word for me, luffing, I had to look the damn thing up...thanks...Hope your New Years eve will be a quiet one & hopefully no more snow for you all...e
I like my quiet with room to breathe too and I get as hungry as the gathering storms, but I am not at all empty like the bluebottle buz. It is amazing how this poem talks of life's solitude but can be applied to other life situations. Thank you for sharing, Kate.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those who you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Even in the dead of silence, buzzing is the mind, I like those moments and times, May your New Year ring in all the goodness life has to offer~
Love,
Christine
Kate you always have such wonderfully intiguing and interesting lines such as "hungry as gathering storms empty as a bluebottle buz".
I marvel at your capacity and talent to blend these into life methaphors. Happy New Year Kate to you and your family...
fee
To me this poem is about living in the present moment. The hush, the silence is where you can hear everything. I was at a cafe this morning and I flushed out all the junk from my mind and just listened to everyone around me..It was quite fascinating to be a part of each one's conversation quietly and unabtrusively listening.
You can learn so much from the sounds of silence.
Have a toast with me on New Year's Eve, to a bright and happy New Year!!!
Muting out all the mundane and ringing in loud and clear all the new possibilities Kate...Silence is Golden...if I may, I'm tip-toeing across your floor with Earl Grey in hand and orange slices dripping with when we are quiet juiciness...let's sit for a spell and reminisce of where we have been and where we are going. Your company next to mine all of these years here on AD, but especially this year has been a sisterly comfort and I am in appreciation Kate. Happy New Year!
This is something rare, like about the ego versus the higher self. For me, your poems always find the deepest places. This is about the kind of silence that is raw material for transformation, for revelation.
Blessings to you for the New Year Kate ~
Christine
Love the metaphors. Thanks for adding that wonderful word Luffing to my crowded vocabulary but everyday finding room for new ones. Being a sea lover I shall try using it in a sea poem when the inspiration dawns on me. And that ending is pure Kate. Marvelous in construction and thought.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
A very Happy New Year to Ya!!!
Sheila
Always,
Deborah
room to breathe
So do I, and Happy New Year to you, Kate.
and wish you a loverly New Year. Love, gene.
Ron
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those who you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Love,
Christine
I marvel at your capacity and talent to blend these into life methaphors. Happy New Year Kate to you and your family...
fee
You can learn so much from the sounds of silence.
Have a toast with me on New Year's Eve, to a bright and happy New Year!!!
Love you, and your spirit,
Amber
Love,
Sage
Blessings to you for the New Year Kate ~
Christine
Hugs,
George