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Stringed Figure (Curlew) , sculpture of brass and string
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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This is work from an experimental poetry workshop I attended yesterday. The image of the sculpture is subject to copyright, but is Google-able if you would like to actually see what this "looks like"! Otherwise, I'm told the name of the game is "entering into the moment of experience", so to speak! Anyways, see what you make of it... xx

Stringed Figure (Curlew) Version II 1956

Sculpture of brass and string –

Dame Barbara Hepworth

 

 

                               songbird

 

swooping blades set upon earth’s plinth

                                                threading skies topmost note

 

tied inland to lay-lines latitudes longitudes

                            true north of lyre lutes and finger-cymbals

 

                              

                               oxygen green soaring heart inverted

 

girdle bone brass-decorated harness

                                           twisted metal bursting iron stays

                                                                               give me air

                                   

 

                               waterbird waterwings

 

gulliver lilliputian-pinned

                                                              balanced against the

wind

                                                                             heed my cry

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Stringed Figure (Curlew) , sculpture of brass and string"
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 26, 2011
I agree with Jude, this is fantastic poetry!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 26, 2011
sharp syntax and juxtaposition .... interesting imagery ... good one, Kate ...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on February 22, 2011
The sculpture looks somewhat like the outside of the Sydney opera House in Sydney, New South Wales, Autralia. The words remind me of what it would be like to be in heaven with music all the time and no worries. Thank you, Kate, for posing this delightful piece.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 22, 2011
Beautiful wording in this piece, Kate. Your interpretations, like you, are always beautiful and elegant.
Amor

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 21, 2011
The sculpture is a true work of art as is your imagined poetry's description of it.

George

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 21, 2011
I don't know about the shape part, but the wording is beautifully done. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2011
masterfully done.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2011
Beautiful indeed sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 21, 2011
Very cool!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 21, 2011
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
Your verses are a fine rendition of and tribute to your subject, Kate. Splendidly and uniquely presented. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
Interesting way to post this, looking like your subject...pretty cool,e

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
i looked up the image and you have perfectly described it! I adore the creative format you've chosen to further enhance this co-creation :)

Reviewed on February 20, 2011
Kate, this is unique and beautiful, The songbird, waterwings imagined...I used to live in Brooklyn Heights,NY...sculpture reminded me of the fast cab rides home over the bridge at odd hours...cabs hated that because they weren't sure they would get a fare back....totally off topic and daydreaming..... I really liked your poem.





Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
Hopkins eat your heart out!
This, i imagine, Kate, would be how Gerard Manley
would be writing today if he were still crafting,
but it's you, uniquely you.
The images strike, score, soar,
gash gold vermilion.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
This is awe-inspiring, Kate, embodied passion!
Ever,
Christine

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
I TOOK A LOOK AT THE SCULPTURE; DEFINTELY A BIRD...A BIRD OF AIR, LAND AND SEA...SOARING...FOREVER FREE. I LIKE YOUR IMPRESSION...DONE VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on February 20, 2011
The shape, the descritors, all excellent Kate.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
As a lover of stringed instruments and the beauty of their sound and styles I can so feel this one. Beautiful job Kate and wonderful capture of your subject.
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
Kate, you soar. Dame Barbara should frame this in brass and
string and hang next to her sculpture. I wonder what she (or
you) would do with a gull, preferrably the laughing gull.
It appears to me, Ms Burnside, that you succeeded beautifully
in putting music to your cry. -gene.

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
This is the beauty of poetry. . . imagery carrying multiple meanings to multiple readers. Well done!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
You nailed the subject firmly and gripped it steadfastly as you continued with the description. Had to look up plinth, and it was perfectly used. This, "gulliver lilliputian-pinned" caught me unawares and delightfully so.



I would say that that you entered into the moment of experience quite well, Kate, and kicked ass.


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