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Then
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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THEN

 

 

only those with

the presence of mind

to kick-off heeled shoes

can possibly hope to survive;

 

our lungs will be bursting

within quarter of a mile

and before reaching fifty feet,

but the deafening roar

will push us on –

 

crossing the dual carriageway

before the wave cuts us like cavalry,

having sluiced through

old quay and town bridge.

 

If we get to the other side,

there’s impenetrable gorse

and inhospitable heathers

masking treacly, quicksand bogs,

 

but waters may rise slower

there, where steep ascents

beneath ancient walls

have long proved

unassailable.

 

Crud builds like

stinking matchwood

as ooze travels on.

 

We’ll build a cairn

of lifeless phones,

a hilltop grave for

our perinatal century;

 

learn to live on blade and berry,

and sleep with mouths open

to catch the midnight dew;

 

to make love

like there’s no tomorrow

as our only means of escape.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Then"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 22, 2011
YOU ARE RIGHT...ONE CANNOT 'NAVIGATE' THROUGH LIFE WELL WITH 'HEELED SHOES' THAT LOOK GREAT BUT ARE NOT 'STABLE'...FOREVER. HEELS WEAR OUT, SOMETIMES BREAK...IT IS ONLY WHEN ONE GETS RID OF THESE APPLIQUES, THAT THEY THEN CAN PLUNDER THROUGH THE TERRAINS OF LIFE, GETTING BACK TO THE BASIC NECESSITIES; TOTAL DEPENDENCE UPON THE PROVISIONS OF GOD, THROUGH FAITH. EXCELLENT METAFORE AND IMAGERY... SO ENJOYED! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 21, 2011
POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 20, 2011
You made me gasp for air and my heart seemed to skip a beat or two as I pondered the pressure of darkness that prevails here, Kate. It is a great poet who can not only create the vision but the phhisical sensations of what they place upon the page. I am in awe with an inability to put into the words the levels of which this moved me.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on March 20, 2011
A strong, relevant piece for these times. These disasters are happening more frequently. Very scary. I've had vivid nightmares about the world ending...different scenarios, from natural to alien, and the outcome is never good. This poem reminds me of one of those dreams in particular. Great work, Kate.
Sheila

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on March 17, 2011
Survival first. What ever that means. The ooze, no escape from it really. The stop light still blinks red even though traffic has been washed out to the outer banks. So we make love like tomorrow will only bring sorrow. (Cheap lead in to my lyrical poem "A Sad song for somebody" circa 2009. God I'm a whore. Patrick

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 17, 2011
there's no where to go but up up and away ;) perceptive, thought-provoking as well as a portend of things to come as well as what they are ...

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2011
Kate, A wakeup call, very real.
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on March 17, 2011
We barely get to lift our heads from one disaster when the next one is knocking it back down. Make love, not war was the cry of my generation. What will our grandchildren think of the mess we've left them?

~W~

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 17, 2011

Kate, you and your pen make disaster sound almost beautiful...
or at least hopeful. Hang on to that pen. -gene.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 17, 2011
Well said, Kate.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 17, 2011
Magnetic writing, Kate,
the poem drives on from first till
final hopefilled landing.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
I'm liking the escape route too :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
That last paragraph sounds a damn good way to escape our future...e

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
What a stark and brilliant rendition of the horrors Kate!
So eloquently put...I absolute love the last three lines!
Ever,
Christine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
Such an apt, timely, and very meaningful and sobring offering, Kate. You provide much substance to reflect upon here; stark and real and yet, I can glean hope from it. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
There is the news of a catastrophe, but there is also the empowering desire of our books and dreams of an adventurous life, a brand new life, a return to nature.
I love the images in:

"We’ll build a cairn
of lifeless phones,
a hilltop grave for
our perinatal century;"

It makes me reflect on our symbols and futile monuments of today.

Axilea

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
I think about this many times over and not for myself but those I helped bring into this world. I admire the Japanese people and how they are dealing with this tragedy and hope we can be as courageous if it happens in our back yard. Great poem that reflects the moment.

Georgexx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
Yes I related to the disastors in Japan but as if you were hypothezizing about what if it happened here....and knowing that the end had come and things would never be the same even if the world around you survuved.
fee

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
Amazing write, Kate. Stunning as always.
Amor

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
Ah . . . Yes, indeed, this too may come to pass . . . Are we advancing ourselves into oblivion? . . . And if we are, does anyone really want to go into the caves of our ancestors and give up . . . Say . . . The Internet? . . . Authors Den? . . . Porn on demand? . . . I mean we don't have to kill and butcher our beef, pork, lamb, etc., ourselves . . . I wonder if some of us could really do that . . . Could we willingly do without the comforts of home and hearth, cool, clean sheets, fluffy pillows and a two-car garage? . . . Do we "really" want to "sleep with mouths open / to catch the midnight dew? . . . Or had we rather keep on keeping on and let the next generation or the next deal with it all . . . I think we all know the answer to that . . . If not, why aren't we doing something about it?

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on March 16, 2011
Kinda sounds like a tribute to the amazing Japanese peoples. Until the last two stanzas.


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