Love In The Dark (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 6, 2011

beautiful....lunatics and sin, whoda thunk lol

Reviewed on June 4, 2011

Perfection, Kate...from beginning to end and in between the satin of your thoughts when you placed this within our imagination.
Amor

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 12, 2011

Like a moving photograph, Kate. Excellent!
Sheila

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2011

Crazy wonderful ~

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2011

Kate, A romantic interlude...
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 28, 2011

wow, when you come to think of it, there is no romance without the presence of "sin" ...

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on March 28, 2011

Oh, the sweetness of Gene's comment! And indeed, he's right. About the inspired and measured presence and gestures of this love in the dark. There is roundness, openness, there are in-between moments and curtains and an outstretched arm and, above all, all that can be imagined and felt in these graceful lines.

Axilea

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 28, 2011

I just love this lunar romantic poem...The best line:
silvering your hair with pools of his lunatic beauty...stellar poetry my dear friend. Watch out for those open windows, one never knows who could be lurking about.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

I more than agree with the accolades below. It is no
accident that "sensual" appears again and again.

There are not enough superlatives to express my
admiration.

Obviously unanimous.

Encore! ENCORE !!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

Ah memories, you bring them back.

George

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

ROFL. I'll e-mail.
Other than your innocence. ONCE again you prove to be a poetic master. No-wonder I loved hearing you on national radio again.

As I read this it brought back memories of a poem I wrote for my son, when new born.
My base mind apart. This paints such a stunning picture! Maybe influenced by the, so called, super moon?! xx

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

As far as I know, dear Kate, there's no Mesopotamian blood in me,
but if envy is a sin, then count me in, because I envy you the
muse that helped you perfect these moonlight lines. Great poetry,
from the click of your bedroom door to your lunatic beauty.
You light up my life... -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

cool!

Reviewed by Frank Mundo

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

Kate,
Really good. I like this one a lot!! Thanks for sharing.
Frank

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

you start a fire in the most subtle way Kate, and enflame us with the image drawn in the last line;-)

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

Oh my...I believe the moon is very powerful .... lovely indeed sweet lady...Hugsss,much love to you

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

Kate when you got something to say, it's worth reading. Great one.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 27, 2011

Great write, Kate.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

damn, what a great poem! but is the moon really what we think it is? this poem says so much with very little, the most powerful kind of poetry there is. great work.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

yowl ! howl! hot!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

Moons come and moons go but when they leave a snail trail on your outstretched arm...ah never mind. Patrick

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

with the one.....such an awesome poem. it glows! Morgan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

Damn! Kate. I have had one horrible day and didn't even want to open this, or any poem up, but I am glad I did. I knew if Kate wrote it, especially about the Mesopotamian Moon god, Sin I couldn't refuse it.

There are so many lines that reach out and grab ya to this poetic beauty you would have to list each and everyone of them to be fair.

I see John is about to have and . . . er . . . Well, John likes the "fits." Wonderful poetry!!!!!

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Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

"whose gleaming snail trail runs the length of your outstretched arm", what a gloriously creative impression Kate. This lunatic experience of a(the) male on a "naked midnight flit". Passionate sojourns I have not forgotten. You painted this one and made a song that hums with imagination's unique whir!. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

"naked midnight flit"
Ah yes, i remember one or two of those...
lunar male 'between-two-rivers' lover for Kate
- different 'sinful' gorgeously sensual.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

Such beautiful imagery of the essence of the moon artfully rendered in verse! "pools of lunatic beauty" has so many meanings in such an elegant phrase. xx
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

I find the sensual allure of your verses most compelling, Kate. Very nicely done. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

I like the way you gave this moon a sensual human quality epecially the last few lines Kate...they rock.
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