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Tats
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Not sure whether this is a peculiar addition to my old Artist and Model series of 2004, which I have fondly revisited of late...

TATS

 

 

A rose that blooms

in a dark and secret place;

 

a butt-cheek butterfly

or biceps ringed with flame.

 

Each precious piercing,

crowned and jewelled,

a lure or lament:

 

part fantasy, part foolhardy.

All love.

 

Love: the unseen

needle-wielding artist

 

who pricks in her palm

the initials of his name

in beads of glistening sweat;

 

or stitches the slightest

parting of her lips

to the valves of his

heavily-beating

heart.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Tats"
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on June 7, 2011
Very nicely done, Kate. I have a tat, too. A tiny rosebud.
Hugs,
CJ

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on June 6, 2011
i loved the artist and model it was romantic and timeless, now this is very contemporary, who knows what forms of endearment future generations will take up after the tatoos become passe....might be scarey like people sewing body parts of each other on the other...oh bad sci fi concept...ick

maybe society will go back to sending snail mail love letters...
more trees maybe carved with lovers initials, or sky writing will gain popularity...I know it pollutes......or perhaps serenades..beneath a senoritas window to rap lolol...so many ways to declare affections lol

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
my, my, dear kate!
loved this sweet ditty! well done.
blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 3, 2011
I don't have any (yet) although I do have a piercing; and you make the experience seem very meaningful. Thank you, Kate. Love and hugs to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2011
Beautiful writing sweet Kate ....Hugsss

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on June 1, 2011
Love and the way we want to be seen, considered and loved... As I read this, I thought of the impermanence of things, of how we are all afraid of forgetting and being forgotten. Tats is not just about the surface, it is also about the way we are and feel, bold and fearful at the same time. Thank you for the original reminder, Kate.

Axilea

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
I know I am unpopular in my view of Tats...as I believe art should be hanging on a wall. Nothing shuts me down quicker than a tat and I do not like piercings on anyone either. I suppose I have never gone in for the fads of the world but I shall go out the way I came in...tatless. But I will worship scars on a woman for injuries or from giving birth way easier for they were not necessarily chosen.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 31, 2011
I AM TOO OLD. HONESTLY, WHEN I WAS A YOUNG WOMAN(I AM 66) BODY PIERCING AND TATTOOS WERE NOT A FAD, AT LEAST NOT THE WAY IT IS TODAY...ONLY SAILORS HAD THEM. STILL, I DON'T JUDGE 'CAUSE THERE'S PROBABLY A LOT OF THINGS I DID THAT THE YOUNGSTERS OF TODAY DON'T DO. WHOA! HOLD ON...I TAKE THAT BACK!(SMILE) THIS IS A REALLY GOOD, ENJOYABLE WORK AND BY THE WAY...I HAVE A SON IN LAW, GRANDCHILDREN AND CHILDREN WHO HAVE TATS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 30, 2011
Provocative ending on this piece, Kate. I have four and still no regrets. That first verse made me also think of how people will hide parts of themselves they don't think others will treasure. It took me a second to realize the true imagery. Well done:)
Sheila

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
I nearly felt like a peeping tom as I was reading your words, Kate; slightly embarrassed by the thoughts of spying on all those private parts. Beautifully visual, you did this well.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Kate's house of artistic tats has offered a classical rendering to feast upon. My mind and eye now united in its pleasures. You've coerced the ink into poetic submission with great finesse. Good to see you at the desk with inspiration. I bid you love and peace my dear friends. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Thanks to you and your colorful body tour, Kate, I have
a new respect for tats. -gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Beautiful Kate as expected from you.

Newfie Hugs Rose

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Reminds me of that movie where the captain had a tat Welcome Aboard

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
a poetic tattoo vibrant and colorful as well as warmly detailed ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
this is really good! such insight and emotion!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
As always your subjects are as diverse and origianal as you are...enjoyed this one.
fee

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Not much for tatoos, tho I can make an exception for a butt cheek butterfly. Color me cheeky. Patrick

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Indelible Kate inks sensuality..
a permanent poetic view.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
...great ending to your poem..no tatoos for me, my tastes change too frequent for something so permanent :)..so good to see you post, you have been missed!
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Wow Kate, your pen has created a net of intrique which captures all who read. I'm glad this one caught my attention.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Your poems are tatoos too-- You, pricking us with your ink, making lovely images on our mind-skins. --Charlie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Better get that heart looked after; if its heavily beating he may have too much fluid in it...maybe from past tears...? ;-)ed

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Mesmerizing sonic elements here, Kate, in this brilliantly prickly poem. There are truly some talented artists whose canvases are on display for only a select few :)
I'm thrilled and relieved to know you are well!!!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Great writing, Kate; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Awesome. When I worked in the OR ran into a lot of strange tats. It was always sad to see a name of their true love near genitals and that person had already left their lives. This is a good take on tats. Lovely. Liz

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Kate, Kate, Kate, it is as if you never left, but you've been gone far too long...Love Tats.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Nice one Mary Poppins, reminds me of the favourite things. (Even if tat) one mans tat is another mans gold.
Things that maybe unseen. Yet the poetic flair is here for all to share.
Such is this kinda love.
Oh for 2004!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Well Kate is back with a fury! I often wanted to get a tatoo, but just never did. I think they could be very sexy if they are done in the right place. I would put mine, well never mind, I will leave it to your imagination! lol
I love your last stanza, it's a true stand out to me. We both have written about beating hearts today..on the same wavelength I guess.
Much peace, love and light,

Amber

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
whew, your subtle innuendos stir my senses, amazing energy comes out of this piece :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
I'm not into tattooing, but you give it a whole new meaning.

Ron

Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Visually, a masterpiece painted on the skin of my eyes -- bless you, Kate. Brilliant.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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