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Opening Of The Mouth Ceremony
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Had great fun taking a small workshop group to write in the local county Museum last week! Surprisingly, next to our own Jurassic fossils we found... Egypt!! :)) xx

 

OPENING OF THE MOUTH CEREMONY

 

 

Snoozing behind smart glass in

the museum’s Egyptology department,

a slim calcite tablet – milky white,

silky-smooth – seems not altogether

cold to the touch.  Made of ancient

soft-boned sediments it looks of

pleasing size and weight to cradle

idly in the palm of a hand.

 

It has seven small indents for

the dab and dip of digits

the length of its long-edge side,

and there runs vertically down

from each a ladder of etched glyphs –

what to speak, correct address,

text of right thing to say.

 

Drop sacred oil into each small bowl,

anoint a tip then run that finger down

the figured squares and apply as required

to desired statue’s lips.

 

Age-old i-phone does its bit:

you’re waiting now for stone to talk,

respond to your invocation,

to cough and say hello.

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Opening Of The Mouth Ceremony"
Reviewed on February 7, 2012
different time different means.....sounds like a great event you attended. nice write. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 31, 2012
Historical jolt...how things have changes...ingenious right Kate! There is something about feeling stone..I have always had a love for rocks, along with my Mother and Grandmother..hmmmm
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
so be it!
love this, kate!
belated happy new year,
carolyn

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
were it only as true as this poem that opening the mouth did not, as is so often the case with the i-phone generation, mean a closing of the mind... your poem, as I suggest in my opening, on the other hand opens minds and pulls the ideal reader ever closer to what the Indigo Girls call 'feeling fine' ... a tender touch is evident throughout this heavy mental invocation...

Be always well, Kate, and at peace amid the turmoil...

Roger

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
You did a great job of mingling exhibit-talk with chatty attitude. The whole thing has this wonderful tongue-in-cheek quality, that makes us both laugh and wonder at the same time. 'Course some of us have already received that message, being "pure in heart" and all... --Charlie

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
Ann Landers meets Cleopatra. Gotta love it Patrick

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
Sounds like fun, indeed. And every time I visit a museum, I seem to be drawn to the Ancient Civilization exhibits. But I think I have an extremely old soul, probably been wandering around this old planet, forever. (And I think the good old days were better.)

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
This is a clever and ingenious piece of writing...It puts us in our place within a much larger historical timeline...
Best wishes, Diana..

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Clever and meaningful, Kate; thank you for sharing your experience. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Wonderful twist and so palpable!
There's something wonderfully primal about this :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
You make it sound exciting, Kate! Great write, I want one if it fits in the palm of my hand,sounds cozy, and fun to use;-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Jerry & Ron about said it all with regards the English language & the direction its going, and I can just about imagine that Jerry is old enough to have seen those stones when they were first made...(if he sees this I am in BIG trouble, LOL)...ed

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
ancient tech? why not! "hello"

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Archeology is fascinating..an intriguing discovery in your poem
thank you for sharing ~Kate Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Very clever ... i like the comparative element in this poem of capturing the stone tablet to that of the i-phone ... also the atmosphere and imagery are vividly and conceptualy encapsulated ...'

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Kate this is quite a descriptive and informative piece of poetry. I haven't been to Egypt yet, but it's on my bucket list.. lol

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
I agree with Ron, the bar was lowered with the flappers and speakeasies and the vocabulary that with with it. Then there was the Rebel Without a Cause generation and their own hip stye and talk and written word, don't forget the sixties and that mess to wade through, now we have the rappers which is actually taking us back to the stone age. Yep. We are evolving to beat the band. Blame Ron, he got me started.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
An ancient iPhone! Now that's a concept. When I was in Egypt and spent two days in the museum, what impressed me most was the uniformity of glyphs over thousands of years. Text in forms of text were passed down through scribes and stone carvers with unvarying precision.

Since English left mother land to explore the world, its form has changed greatly over the years. The American version is changing even more rapidly. With texting, the bar was lowered.

We have much to learn from the ancients.

Ron


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