FRAGILE SKATER
Pain can do it and grief
most certainly will:
create the cracks
on the smooth, unruffled
surface of a mind
where dreams henceforth
will always fear to tread.
But instead she laces tight
her boots of faith, steps out
with sharp blades shining
to skate sleek arabesques
on black ponds of frozen pain,
white wings unfurled to greet
fresh winds of warm compassion.
Sibelius sings of her, this swan
whose luminosity loiters,
making sacred the dark Tuonela waters,
Hell’s rivers which themselves will freeze
before the flame of child-love chills
of which her story dances.
Sorrow’s thin-ice fissures
appear to disappear
when deep darkness melts
to all-seeing light
as, glissando, she sails by.
The visuals bring a lump to my throat as I see the determined skater, lacing her boots on against pain, but moving forward with a resolute sureness that wind/resistance is needed to help us soar... be it across a frozen pond or with wings in flight.
Cryssa
Lovely entrancing poetry Kate.
Lady Mary Ann
mark walters
Wow. ~Z.B. McClure 'Zach'
Ron
Always,
Deborah
You have penned a beautiful response to Christine's Glissando poem. I also felt compelled to want to write a response, but I didn't and this poem truly is the essence of her.
Thank you for sharing your heart.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
and are in harmony with Christine's glissando;
love that Sibelius, its haunting reaching melody..
excellent choice in an excellent poem
john
Regis
(appear to) disappear".
Axilea
This is so sweet!!! and what original music I hear from a Sibelius sister in spirit ~
Bless you love always, xxx
Christine
- she takes to the treacherous, rough black ice of personal sorrow with her shinny new skates of optimism and faith - love it my dear friend - I wish you love and peace - Jon Michael
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Wonderful imagry with superb references to figures of antiquity and reverence. One for anyone to keep and reread many times again.
Budd