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Fragile Skater
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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for Christine Tsen

 

FRAGILE SKATER

 

 

Pain can do it and grief

most certainly will:

create the cracks

on the smooth, unruffled

surface of a mind

where dreams henceforth

will always fear to tread.

 

But instead she laces tight

her boots of faith, steps out

with sharp blades shining

to skate sleek arabesques

on black ponds of frozen pain,

white wings unfurled to greet

fresh winds of warm compassion.

 

Sibelius sings of her, this swan

whose luminosity loiters,

making sacred the dark Tuonela waters,

Hell’s rivers which themselves will freeze

before the flame of child-love chills

of which her story dances.

 

Sorrow’s thin-ice fissures

appear to disappear

when deep darkness melts

to all-seeing light

as, glissando, she sails by.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Fragile Skater"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on October 1, 2012
Love this...
The visuals bring a lump to my throat as I see the determined skater, lacing her boots on against pain, but moving forward with a resolute sureness that wind/resistance is needed to help us soar... be it across a frozen pond or with wings in flight.

Cryssa

Reviewed on June 11, 2012
the imagery is wonderful and perfect!

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on June 10, 2012
Sibelius sings to her, this swan of which her story dances.
Lovely entrancing poetry Kate.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by mark walters
Reviewed on June 9, 2012
That's a fascinating study. The imagery is so powerful. Thanks,

mark walters

Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on June 5, 2012
I have often been amazed at how people can be struggling so on the inside, while appearing so serene from the outside. I believe you've captured this very well in a very interesting and enjoyable way.
Wow. ~Z.B. McClure 'Zach'

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 4, 2012
YOU'VE CAPTURED, SO WELL, A LARGE PORTION OF CHRISTINE IN THIS BEAUTIFUL PORTRAIT...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 4, 2012
An insightful, beautiful poem in tribute to Christine's. Nothing here escapes your keen observation. Are you celebrating the Queen?

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 4, 2012
Emotions unfold as I read this gem..strength of every bit of our being is sometimes needed to take that step, thens glide again~

Reviewed by Valerie Caramella
Reviewed on June 4, 2012
Hi Kate. I love the art of ice skating as you employed it in this dynamic poem of heavenly warm faith. ~Valerie~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 3, 2012
great imagery ,,, sure Christine will skate into the depths of this one ...

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2012
Kate, A beautiful poem for Christine. I love the metaphors...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 3, 2012
Kate,
You have penned a beautiful response to Christine's Glissando poem. I also felt compelled to want to write a response, but I didn't and this poem truly is the essence of her.

Thank you for sharing your heart.

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 3, 2012
Great visuals, and an ice-embracing encouragement that is seen as well as felt. A wonderful gift. --Charlie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 3, 2012
the images delight, Kate,
and are in harmony with Christine's glissando;
love that Sibelius, its haunting reaching melody..
excellent choice in an excellent poem

john

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
A lovely and meaningfuf metaphorical offering for Christine, Kate. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Googled some words but still found this to be quite a nice write for Christine...e

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
A lovely metaphor that dances with confidence and grace. "Boots of faith" is an image that speaks to me, as I can imagine her concentrating and getting ready in an almost ritual way - gestures that are repeated like some form of meditation and prayer - and the music of hope and faith accompanies her every move. A beautiful and meaningful way of making "sorrow’s thin-ice fissures
(appear to) disappear".

Axilea

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Kate, thank you, I am utterly speechless!
This is so sweet!!! and what original music I hear from a Sibelius sister in spirit ~
Bless you love always, xxx
Christine

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Kate, perfectly written and complimentary to Christine's "glissando"
- she takes to the treacherous, rough black ice of personal sorrow with her shinny new skates of optimism and faith - love it my dear friend - I wish you love and peace - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
I treasure writing that makes me run for the dictionary (Jerry), and this one is a svelt, multi-planed offering that exudes elegance and customed-honed lexicology; i.e. glissando, for a musician, entwined with grace of the arabesque and the sublime image of 'black ponds.' Rich tapestry and tribute. I love this. ~~ Dian

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
As a refrain to Christines Glissando this one is just what the poet ordered Kate. Like one poem off setting the other. Very nicely done and I am sure Christine will be flattered by the melding of your muse and hers.
fee

Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Beautiful write; well done, Kate!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Kate,
Wonderful imagry with superb references to figures of antiquity and reverence. One for anyone to keep and reread many times again.
Budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Jeez! Had me scrambling for the dictionary. Love the fact that with a gleaming pair her "boots of faith" she goes into battle, determined to overcome pain and fear and the deep, swift-running waters rushing into Hades by way of darkness so pliable she can taste it. Loved this semi-musical rush to halt a horrible fate.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Elegant narrative of that complex terrain called "mind."


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