SILENCE
Silence is –
but flowing is this
turbulence of words
wherein we pan its rinsing veins
for serenity of truth,
sieve its silt of slag and dross
through heart’s taught-tangled mesh,
prospect the genuine: gold
not fake nor fawning in
the tawdry bluff of fools.
Mercurial as water, yet
its trained-eye stillness sings,
weighs time and tide
in carat scales;
puts value on what’s past upstream,
holds crystalline today and
illumines lakes of future.
So bright you plumb its ringing depths,
hoard nuggets of its shine.
Cryssa
Always,
Deborah
Axilea
Ragno
"prospect the genuine: gold
not fake nor fawning in
the tawdry bluff of fools."
powerful verse in a poem that shouts with verve, perspective and the skillful overlay of imagery and metaphor ... a golden nugget of pure poetry ...
fee
Ron
"sieve its silt of slag and dross" is a favorite line, but there are many.
It's a place of deepest emotions and it's where we can choose, like choosing light and joy over everything else. Hmmm, and silence is where you know that faith and love are everything.
Love,
Christine
holds crystalline stillness sings silence is.
Unique trilogy Kate.
Lady Mary Ann
Regis
A finely crafted blend of physical and metaphysical, eureka.
Budd
Indeed, be like water my friend, be like water. xxx
Blessings,
Christine
Love,
Sage
Cannot wait for the third part.
You are on a roll, Miss Kate, keep um coming...
Shine on, listen to the silence and absorb the beauty of love.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
holds crystalline today and
illumines lakes of future."
Fan-TAS-tic are these three little lines. They say it all. Everything which is valid and valuable is included in these three superb lines, Kate. The rest of the poem is stand alone in their own right, but you hit pay dirt with these three. Eureka!