Pina Colada Kinship (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 1, 2014

So easily you seem to turn each simple phrase, like examining the contents of your drink through the transparency of glass. N,True

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2014

Those two last lines of this lovely piece of writing are exquisite: "not even time/lies between them." Beautiful and expansive. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 31, 2014

Kate,
The Song from the 70's Pina Colada rings in my head as I read your poem.
It's all about destiny, darling, and how we travel toward that elusive butterfly....
Nicely done Kate my sweet friend.
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2014

Kate, You open up our senses with the words that you use
and we become participles and cling on...Enjoyed as Always!

Deborah

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 13, 2014

I'll drink to that.

As always you stir the readers imagination beyond the printed words.

Most happy to read you once again.

George

Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2014

Wonderful poem, sweet story told.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on January 11, 2014

Mmmmm how utterly blissful!
Diana...

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on January 9, 2014

Wonderful enigmatic sensorial magic.

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on January 7, 2014

The third line takes a very good poem
and lifts it up to the sky!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on January 7, 2014

THis is really leaving out the cold windswept snow to melt within that weave of the hammocks contents. What beauty therein lies especially with that one stanza:
"Breathing in resonance,
breathing out rhyme,
not even time
lies between them."
You have my attention Kate, your writes are truly inspirational journeys
Amor

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 6, 2014

You verses awaken the senses, Kate... ...and the imagination. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 6, 2014

Truer love was never written. Your way with words providing deep meaning is outstanding. Exactly how I feel when she's holding me close. Swaying to our own special breeze and intoxicated by the warmth.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 5, 2014

i'll always drink to a spirited poem, even while swaying in an the variable breeze ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on January 5, 2014

Suspended belief about biorthymic. Then I see your circular thoughts and the depth of the romance between the couple entwined in perfect bliss in perfect time. In contact with nature two lovers collide on the hammock that the union of souls poetically collide.

Natures dance always enchants when two become one with sublime divine love. Xx

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on January 5, 2014

such a wonderful write to pick up ones senses
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on January 5, 2014

Ahhh . . . Beautiful, Kate, just beautiful. Sometimes there really isn't any more left to say. This is one of those times.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on January 5, 2014

excellent! I myself would love to be in Hawaii!!!!!!