I particularly appreciated the title to this piece, as it allows the reader to make what he or she will out of poem's body. Playful and anticipatory. Enjoyable respite for this reader today.
looking forward for the next one. you got me hanging.
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2014
I see the punch of those last two lines. Wow. Not only passed, but on cold, slippered feet. That holds an achy sadness of loss. Great to have put the "....to be continued" introduction. There is such energy in this poem, light and anticipatory....before the fall. Yes, I'll be eager to continue this one. ~~ Diana
Kate,
this leaves me wanting more! I feel such anticipation almost anxiety, about what is about to happen...I say Live in that moment and enjoy it to the fullest.
Good to see you posting!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
on cold, slippered feet." Love and best wishes,
Regis
Ron
Diana...
this leaves me wanting more! I feel such anticipation almost anxiety, about what is about to happen...I say Live in that moment and enjoy it to the fullest.
Good to see you posting!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
budd