Written words on a wall
make me wonder who you are.
Did you break someone's heart
the day you had to part?
Or did you simply turn away
after you led them astray,
sweet Iris?
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Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
What I like best about this is that you say so much in so small a space, which shows skill with the balance of words.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
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