After storms which maim the soul, bare the burden, leave the toll, erase the smudge upon the heart, lest love from life too soon depart in tragic pasts gone unrelieved, no alchemist can dream deceive, counting pennies in the well, only hopes you could not sell.
Like sun that shines upon the sea, never-more adrift, just be, risen from the depths which surge over symptoms awaiting purge, sail the waters, free to swim, sip the salt of dream again if only to feel the wind in hair and cast the past into the air, breathe the scent of change's tide, essence of truth, no longer denied.
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Reviews of "Inhale"
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Inhale and then exhale after reading this splendid piece to fell revived, refreshed...what a splendid beautiful piece of poetry!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
What a delightful poem you have penned Poet! I enjoyed the read very much, and now feel very refreshed. Thank you for sharing it. Keep The Faith.
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~Nikki~
This is a most excellent write. Love the cleansing feeling that it emits. Your rhyme and meter are excellent.
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