Bubbly and effervescent. Short, simple, and STICKY
Cheers
Alain
Reviewed by * ashura (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2004
Asparagus between my teeth .... Hmmm! I guess that's not a compliment. A heap of irony in this. Well done.
michael
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Cleverly done
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Ha! Ha! Oh, boy, have I been there, done that. Great lines and greater message, like, a bad penny always shoes up. Or something like that. I loved it. Yes.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
What an all-encompassing poetic description of a failed, yet
persistent love.
Great work here, girl.
Ann,you really got this point across !
whamo! Beautifully done!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
Great write!!! Poet try using WD40, it will remove the “Sticky Stuff” from the bottom of your shoe! I wouldn’t advise though for your teeth…yuck… And Yes the story is true. Rose died in 1978 after her husband was murdered in 1974. That’s where both of these stories came from. I had the oak tree dug up and moved next to her and her beloved husband. Keep The Faith.
I seem to know, even though I never had this problem, as far as I can recall, getting too old to remember anyway...but I do know where you come from with this wonderful gem, glad I stopped to read it...Peace Ed & Rufuz (& thanks for the review on my recent roast)
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
An exceptional and well-delivered write - enjoyed immensely!
Robert
Cheers
Alain
michael
persistent love.
Great work here, girl.
whamo! Beautifully done!