Romantic Theme
Collaboration with Fellow Author's Den
writer Glenda Schattie

In Love We Trust


by Glenda Schattie




Wednesday, June 02, 2004


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This work was done by myself and another author, trying our hand in a work together. Hope you enjoy it.

I long for true love in so many different ways,
No matter the cost, I'll give it my all.
The Way to my Heart, is wide open again,
So clasp my fingers, and let's go for broke.


Feeling the kiss that just makes my body tremble,
The gentle hands touching my body so deep.
The two minds thinking so clearly,
As if they entwined into one.


Wrapped in each other, this desire is so strong,
Caressing your soft skin, so tender and warm.
Our union is perfect, and close to the heart,
Your sweet love is forever holding me high.


Seems the bond gets stronger every day.
My mind racing, of the so many ways.
The sensuous touch of your strong and gentle hand,
The only thing seperating us, besides the ocean is the land.



By
Peter James Paton & Glenda Schattie





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Review/Comments by peter paton







Reviewed by Christina Santos 6/4/2004

Beautiful poem, words are very stimulating in that you can almost feel what the authors are feeling. Slightly disjointed, but almost in a breathless way, as lovers do after a passionate kiss. :)




Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed 6/4/2004

Wonderful and extremely romantic. The two brains worked hard to give us a beautiful piece of a love poem. Thanks for sharing.




Reviewed by Rose Limongi 6/3/2004

A beautiful testimony to love, well done. I hope this is not the last time the two of your create such beautiful work together.

~Rose~




Reviewed by Rebecca (Becca) Henry 6/2/2004

Beautiful and Romantic




Reviewed by Elizabeth Stember 6/2/2004

Truely seeing into the soul of anyone who has ever been in love. A cute poem with deep understanding. A simple message simply stated, well done.




Reviewed by Lori Moore 6/2/2004

Very romantic. Enjoyed.