Romantic Theme
Collaboration with Fellow Author's Den Writer Elizabeth Evelyn Stember

Sweet Child In Time


by Mr Paton




Thursday, May 20, 2004


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Romantic Theme
Joint Collaboration with Elizabeth Evlyn Stember

Sweet Child In Time


Romantic Theme

Lost in your Sweet Love , so Deep and Strong ,
I feel your heartbeat , in Union with Mine .
This time its for ever , and ever again ,
So Bind us together , through
the Mists of Time.

Everchanging, like the tides rhythm
so our love stands.
Let's not be parted, the wandering hurts,
Let our legacy stand the test of time .


We're tied to each other , with Cords of Love ,
A Melody so sweet , and straight from the Heart
For we have found , a Beauty unsurpassed ,
So gentle and pure , and made to Last

Hatred of Old, and Jealousies unremembered ,
Can touch us no longer .
Once were two ,
We have become One .
Halves made whole ,
Nothing will make us
part again.


This Right has been given us ,
From Heaven Above ,
And No Power on Earth , Child ,
Can take it Away .

Copyright Peter Paton 2004
Joint Collaboration with Elizabeth Evlyn Stember

Sweet Child In Time


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Review/Comments by peter paton







Reviewed by Rebecca (Becca) Henry 5/21/2004

Beautiful!




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge 5/20/2004

Your poetry is so beautiful, I went back and read all the recent ones, they have an honest and real feeling of love that is timeless. I enjoyed each one.




Reviewed by Rose Limongi 5/20/2004

Peter,

Yet another beautiful offering to the child of love within all of us.

~Rose~