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Our Love Sublime
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Collaboration with Fellow Author's Den Writer Rose Limongi

Our Love Sublime



by Rose Limongi
Tuesday, May 25, 2004


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A Collaborative Effort with Rose Limongi & Peter Paton.








Our Love so different, from any other kind,



Comes with a notice, forever you are mine.



And if the world objects, it’s of no concern to us,



So lost in sweet attention, and love sublime.








Many have observed our love, so precious and so rare



Filled with envy, lust and pain that say it just won’t last



Yet we know the depth of our love bears roots so strong



No storm of emotion could uproot this bond between us








The sands of time run swiftly from the glass,



The beauty of our concord is delivered to you and me.



A sparkling mountain river, has never known this emotion before,



Feel the wind of Heaven, coursing softly down on thee.








A love that soars above all else, higher still do we climb



No path to difficult to traverse, we conquer them one at a time



Our union melds with nature’s lust, the result a stronger bind



My hand in yours as two pulses become one, soul, heart and mind.








The fragrance of new love, musky and intoxicating,



Gentleness and tenderness, encapsulating all.



Hear my heart a new song, that heralds the day,



Paradise is falling, like eiderdown on us.








Sublime love, so exalted in it’s splendor



Brings forth a call to heed such affection



For you are the one I truly do adore



With us there resides a perfect connection.







Copyright 2004 Rose Limongi & Peter Paton







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Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey 5/31/2004

This is absolutely devine...your poetry moulds wings to carry forth the verses into the readers heart...thoroughly enjoyed...Fletcher B




Reviewed by Simon Thurlow 5/30/2004

Nicely flowing in both expression and word. Well done to you both




Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/29/2004

Love is all! You've expressed it well once more, Rose. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis




Reviewed by Debashish Haar 5/28/2004

This is amazing, Rose!




Reviewed by Bill Murray 5/28/2004

Rose you and Peter seem to have done a good job on this. One problem. My eyes can't read the small print. I probably could were it black print. But I can get enough from it to know that there is stong sentiment in it. I am interested for when I saw "Peter Paton"
mentioned I went to find out who he is. Seems t be a man of mystery.
His poems so far as I can tell are rather esoteric and deep. Thank you Rose for the poem. Maybe you could increase the font size. Let me know and I will go back to it again. Bill




Reviewed by Jeff Mason 5/28/2004

This is very easy to relate to, and nicely crafted. -- Jeff




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge 5/28/2004

I hope we see more of these, this is lovely.




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/27/2004

You both created beauty here..
Love the art........




Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 5/27/2004

clap clap clap....wonderful composition....BHUWAN




Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr 5/27/2004

Must say this shows the talent of two writers to blind their thoughts together in flowing write. Must agree that nothing great than two hands together the pulses becoming one.
Nice write here!!

~~~Tommy &&&***




Reviewed by Handsum Hart 5/27/2004

beautiful and romantic, a poetic gem Rose
lovely artwork also




Reviewed by Judith Pleasant 5/26/2004

Amazingly perfect and beautiful.
Blessings,
Judith




Reviewed by Michelle Mead 5/26/2004

How beautiful! I feel the same way about someone:)




Reviewed by Eddie Thompson 5/26/2004

i enjoyed this poem...it left much for me to ponder.




Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 5/26/2004

Good collaboration! Hard to do, I know. I like the melodious thread running through it. Very good.

Carmen :-)






Reviewed by cynth'ya reed 5/26/2004

harmonious, you and Peter.

Smiles,
clr




Reviewed by Eileen Waldron 5/25/2004

A most beautiful collaboration Rose and Peter!
This is very special, wonderfully crafted! Kudo's!




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/25/2004

Beautiful Romantic write Rose!!

Love Tinka




Reviewed by Lady Peg 5/25/2004

Rose this is so beautiful love that stunning art......




Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/25/2004

Beautiful combintion of talents!




Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger 5/25/2004

Poet Rose Limongi this is such a beautiful romantic write. Wonderful collaboration between you and Poet Peter Paton. Truly takes ones breath away to remember sharing those feelings. If feels right who cares what the rest of the world thinks! Right on! Great picture too! Enjoyed the trip down memory lane. Thank you for sharing this inspirational love feast! Keep The Faith.




Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/25/2004

Perfect romance. Enjoyed.

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 Reviews of "Our Love Sublime"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 13, 2006
I like this

Reviewed on November 18, 2004
Peter & Rose,

A wonderfully written poetic collaboration - stunningly perfected!!

Best wishes,

Robert


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