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I'm Gonna Make You My Bride
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Deeply Romantic

I'm Gonna Make You My Bride
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I'm Gonna Make You My Bride

Your love so beautiful has bewitched my beating heart
And your smile so tender ," As you say we will never part "
I love the way your little hand nestles within mine
And I promise you baby " I'm gonna make you my Bride ".

My heart is pounding like a choo choo train
Whenever someone speaks your golden name
The starlight is shining deep in your eyes
As you whisper to me darling " I'm so in love with you " .

Your sweet kiss and cuddle is all I'll ever need
So much emotion and love drifting round
A golden ring of love on your tiny left hand
And a bridal dress enscribed with our very own names.

Tears of Joy and Happiness spreading through my Soul
My heart is palpitating way deep inside
This wonderful bond is forever babe
Cuz I'm gonna make you my Bride

Peter Paton Copyright 2004
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 Reviews of "I'm Gonna Make You My Bride"
Reviewed on November 20, 2004
Peter,

An eloquent, vivid, romantic write - imaged to perfection!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
hmm..who's the lucky Damsel...hmm?...:)

exceptional write..


*V*

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 15, 2004
ohhhhhhhhhhh
this is so so romantic, loving and sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hope she said...........yesssssssssss!!!

pax........Anita :)

Reviewed by Elaine Carey
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
This one has a lilt that begs to be set to music!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2004
Beautiful poem Peter; so warm and personal. You gave it your best shot and the reward is waiting for you. Bill

Reviewed on June 27, 2004
"I'm Gonna Make You My Bride" came out from a ball of fire of a heart that pumps love.

Enjoyable reading.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 27, 2004
You romantic You!!

Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
well penned romanticism ...

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on June 25, 2004
The love contained within this write jumps off the page (or screen in this case). Bravo Peter!!

~Rose~

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2004
Very sweet.

Amy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 25, 2004
Wonderfully romantic, full of whimsy!
Enjoyed mucho! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 25, 2004
Strong expression of passionate romantic love. Thank you for this offering, Peter. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed on June 25, 2004
(((awwwwww peter)))

if anyone turns you down, they're crazy

this is romantic and so sweet :) very well done--i love it!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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