Rites of Love (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 17, 2004

Peter,

Succinct; magical; immersed in poetic tranquility - superb my friend!!

Robert

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

A wondrous expression of divine love. True love is a holy act of consecration. You have captured it so beautifully here.
With respect
Chanti

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

GLORIOUS..MAGNIFICENT..SUPERB!!!! I LOVE your work!!!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Beautiful, romantic expression of love! ...Outstanding write, Dear Poet!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Peter, this is very loving and deply moving. It has all the elements of real love!

Reviewed by Robert Montesino

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Such beautiful verse Peter, well deserving of the praise recieved!

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Our sacred love is whole...
I love that phrasing.
That's exactly the kind of love I have been looking for all my life. Very well expressed. Wonderful and intense write.
Love

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Such a lovely and romantic poem, This was beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

Beautiful and lovingly devoted poetry Peter...superbly said.
Allen

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

Wonderful sentiments here, Peter. Thank you.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

Maybe I ought to pay more attention to these rites, Peter. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

"Immaculate and devoted
Lodged in joint solemn vow"

Oh if only this were enacted,true joy and passion
would finally be known!
Splendid inspired poetry Peter!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

(((peter)))

beautiful, beautiful write here, dear poet. bewitching! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

Most excellent Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

Well done Peter.