Alluring, captivating, sensual and utterly irresistible. The power of passion portrayed not in a tawdry way but with sensitivity and depth. I love it!
Chanti
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2004
..Oh yes..yes..yes!! Erotica and divine passion at its best..indeed Peter..YOU know...*smile*
Vesna :)..(I've saved this one as well...in fear of losing it! )
Who else could write about a normal act in such an exquisite way? Only you, my dear.
By reading these lines I feel like having never experienced something similar.
Outstanding !!!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Peter, this is an exceptionally well-written descriptive, sensual, erotic piece, of pulsating passionate poetry. Excellent job, Poet. Bravo!
An empathic young nurse driven to help and heal others since childhood after watching her mother languish for months before finally succumbing to cancer, Aziza Lopez abhors cruelty and suffering in any form. When she is assigned comatose patient Davi
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
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Your poetic imagery is shear perfection my friend - exceptional all the way!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Chanti
Vesna :)..(I've saved this one as well...in fear of losing it! )
splendidly told!
By reading these lines I feel like having never experienced something similar.
Outstanding !!!
Love Tinka
Amazing, these "shimmering silhouettes" are a "thrilling tempo".
Amy
wonderful imagery in this passionate write--outstanding work, poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
especially like the line, "...impaled on pulsating desire..." WOW