Perpetual Token (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Dear Peter,

Perpetual Token, you sure know how to write them, so powerful and yet so tender, looks like I have competiton hee hee.

hugs and love
Elga

you see, I promised, and I did keep my promise
one more to go.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Oh My....
this is the sexies
passion filled poem
I've came a cross in a minute!!!
enjoyed greatfully

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Peter -

Exceptional work - Bravo!

Robert

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Exquisite choice of words for a perfect reunion of two people, loving each other.
Wonderful write.
Lots of love
Amira

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

yes!

;) Contesse

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Very passionate write!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Exquisite, Peter..poetic, clear and simple... skillfull writing, beautiful description of love

Gina

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Stunning and beautiful gem of a poem Peter!

LP

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Sensual but a gentle delight

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Excellent write, Peter.

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

"Hoping and praying This wondrous feeling Will never end"..no doubts, no worries....:)
So many lines I love about this one. This poem is very special indeed.

Amy

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Mysterious realms of celestial splendour
Rich in symbolism and perfect love

Masculine beauty and power

Feminine gentleness and desire

Entwined and besotted sacred knot

Merging the dream

Of Heavenly scheme

indeed Peter you fathom the Twin Flame connection..I am enthralled to say the least..

This piece is saved
for it my heart has paved
with hope and desire..
and eternal Fire!

I am truly besotted with your work..write on Poet!!

Vesna :)*

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Dear Peter,
If the cute baby pic didn't do it, this did! lol
No seriously, this really is an outstanding, heartwarming poem. I love the imagery of lines such as 'Rubbing my stubble, On the back of your neck' and 'Entwined and besotted sacred knot' This touches me deeply and I love the feel of intimacy captured in this depiction of a union between two people in love.
Truly lovely poet!
Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

oo la la! This is sensuality at its best Peter!
Done with know how and class!;-) Glorious!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Love the way the genders are discribed, prolly as only a scotsman can.

Mysical magical love..