Perfection (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

Dear Peter,

This is indeed pure perfection.

Super write Peter.

hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

nice one peter.

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Perfection is seen in the writing of this moving piece. Bravo!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

When Love meets art, and knowledge mingles with wisdom, wonders in the heart are emotions, and the Soul can dictate "Perfection".

This poem, "Perfection" is a Flower scented with mellifluous aroma to be felt throughout the millennia .

Never rest Your pen, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

This was lovely, very beautifully romantic,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

very beautiful tonality to this poem!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

This was simply superb!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

Clear and refreshing dimension

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

now this is poetry!!!
love the tribute to your love
and the rhythm........mmmm

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

Peter -

Shear "Perfection!" Nothing short of fabulous!

Robert

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

I am sure you must have thought about me, when you wrot this Peter, hehe.
No, seriously: Outstanding write about the queen of your heart. Lucky you.
Love
Amira

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 14, 2004

Poetically perfect, Peter. Love and peace and thanks for sharing this offering. Regis

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Peter, your pen has the softest touch in these most beautiful love writes.
Allen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Such gorgeous rhyme and rhythm Peter
in this splendid passionate and perfect poem!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

this is quite a write!
romantic, respectful, loving and sexy.........very honest.......
and very beautiful......straight from the heart..........

pax A

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Around you an aura of Marian beauty
Sweetheart of mine , forever shine
In you , there is no darkness at all

Crystal fountain clear , a desirable veneer
Steadfast and devoted faith
A blessing , Oh lovestar supreme

Perfection in your poetry.. Bravo!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Great imagery in this romance poem

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Peter, you picked the perfect title for this brilliant composition! You have most definitely dip your golden quill, and have penned a lovely passionate piece of pleasing poetry, Poet! Well-done my friend. Very uplifting write. Thank you for sharing your timeless work.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

" You are Perfection in every way
Encompassed with love , gifted from above
Holy thou art , from the Soul to the Heart "

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Perfection was
and perfection be
in purity of Love free
in ethereal realms
we unite
in oneness of Love
oneness of Light

Sir Knight...this is exquisite..a gem..a truth..Love!

*V*

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

poetic perfection!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Very well written Peter! Looks like you are about ready to present your golden Lady. Bet she is a wonderful person! Bill

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

This is perfection in every way wonderful Peter!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

A blessing of love from your pen to some lucky person. Your words are dressed up and proud. I love the passion here!
Susan