The Ache of Love (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Peter, I am sure you melted your lover�s heart with this magnificent poetic passionate composition. An outstanding job my friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Sweet romance, just beautiful.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Dear Peter,

It's wonderful when love can be everlasting ....
Beautiful and extremely touching.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

most endearing romantic purity ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Heart touching write.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Your heart is showing, Peter. So tender and sweet.

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Peter, you are a true romantic.

Amy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Romantic gentle, but passionate beautifully
expressed Peter. Like you said nice and passionate
a winning combination

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Heavenly bliss and child like trust
Kisses so tender , romantic and pure

Extremely loving, Heartfelt, and Romantic Pledge to your loving sweetheart, Peter.

Well Done!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Awesome romance! Very nice.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

And my heart goes beat beat beat
Just for you

Simplisticly sexy!
;-)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Believe me the care of being in one's heart this fine tuned would become bliss as your poetry goes beyond the heart. You are one heck of a romantic.
Susan

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Very tender, loving write. Beautiful.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

A sincere and loving write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Tender beautiful heart touching piece Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

"The Ache of Love" sings the Paean of devotion...

"Oh I pledge thee this day , with all my might
To bring you happiness throughout your life
Promises of devotion , and holy tenderness
My life I give , into your sweet care."

This closing stanza is a romantic grand of poetic excellence.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Exquisite!!!!

vesna :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

sweet and tender write, peter! beautifully conveyed and told in such a loving, caring way! BRAVO! fine write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

thanks for your reviews as of late; they are all appreciated very much by me! :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

(((peter)))

whomever your lady is, she is blessed to have you in her life...sigh, this is beautful, yearning, romantic poetry! well done, poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

this is lovely........i am sure your lady adores your writes.......!