Addicted to your love , in a very vibrant way
Shockwaves of pleasure , pulsing through my being
Your warm and delicious kisses , spinning me to heaven
Romance and passion brightly aflame , sensuality is the name
Cooing like a love dove , you send me in every way
Gosh I love this feeling , coursing through my veins
Never have I known this feeling , true love is so rare
Walking hand in hand with you , through our garden fair
Promises and pledges , rubber stamped from above
Matching golden rings , and committment holy and special
Alluring gorgeous words , exchanged in secret caution
Honeysuckle and jasmine , adorning our arch of heaven
Oh sweet pleasure , how i love to love you
And bury my face on your sacred star divine
Rapturous sensations , racing in euphoria
Reeling and rolling , in glorious ebb and flow
Exceeding all expecations , in fabolous bliss and joy
Shattering and draining , this ecstasy superb
Relaxing and basking , in the afterglow of love
Tender caresses , and kisses oh kisses sublime
Stroking your loving face , and whispering I love you
Melting your heart , with vows of happiness
Hugs and cuddles , savouring every precious moment
Now darling you know , I'll forever be your man .
Sensual, yet softly so, and a joy to read. It's nice to find a man comfortable in his skin, comfortable enough to feel secure in writing about such lovely feelings. I applaud you, Peter!
Hugs,
CJ
Nice write, Peter. Perhaps one of your best... at least in my opinion. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
Peter, this is an incredible romantic piece, which I’m quite sure has shaken the very foundation of the one it was penned for. An excellent poetic composition my friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
Shirine McVey discovers that twenty years of her life have elapsed since she went to sleep in a hotel room in El Paso, Texas. And worse, she is married to a man she doesn't know.
Book 2 of the romance trilogy Horses of Tir Na Nog
Life for CJ, and Shawn, has taken on new meaning and a wonderful turn. Never in a million years did CJ think she could be this happy. With her new husband and closest friends in tow, she’s bound
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Hugs,
CJ
Birgit and Roger
know this feeling all too well.
Lucky you if you get a response to it. Someone who's feeling the way you do.
Perfect poem.
This poem is dressed up to meet the millennia. it is a true poetic Flower.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
..sigh..I wish that special someone would say such exquiste words to me..Oh well..next time 'round..
blessed is she for whom your bell tolls...
vesna:.:)
Fab u loso write dear one
Contesse
compare in this genre! Splendid prose!
Supreme imagery that exemplifies this outstanding prose - wonderful!!
Robert
Wonderful. . . you spin a delicious web of romance . . .
jeanne
poet, i love the way you write--the imagery! the tender emotion! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Most stunning piece Peter!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
thanks for your sweet review on my story; it's much appreciated! :D
Awesome!
Lisa
Amy