A special blessing
in the celestial skies
marked our destinied union
the day we met
Angels kissed in purity
and a new star
emerged from heaven
radiating in the evening canopy
sighs of devotion
transmitted from above
bewitched you and I
with deep breaths of love
Holy and enchanting
your eyes divine
fresh and beautiful
your kiss sublime
tender is your touch
with words so kind
embracing my soul
so intimate and mine
enchanting harps
with quivering strings of gold
melting my heart
captivated , forever thine
Whirling desire
sweet and raging fire
Passion so persistent
Sweeping all before
Levitating my feet
In starstruck melody
Iridescent colors
peacock blue and hue
fragrance of paradise
jasmine and wistaria
sparkle and flood
our glossy glade of love
Copyright Peter Paton 2004
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2004
What a wonderful poem.
Lines filled with the eternal music of love and passion!
Love this one.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2004
I just love how you've used words here, this is one heck of a write....
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
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Lines filled with the eternal music of love and passion!
Love this one.
Outstanding and creatively stunning - this is one exceptional write ... "Passion so persistent" - what a great line!
Robert
transmitted from above
bewitched you and I
with deep breaths of love
..indeed....
glowing write...
vesna :)
Excellent poetry.
Lisa
Exquisite imagery and delightfully passionate,
Great poetry.
hugs and love
Elga
this is absolutely amazing work. rich in imagery and multi-sensoral; a pure pleasure to read and yes, experience your poetry! well done, poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
A keeper okay!!
Love Tinka
Amy