Sweet star of my heart
I love you so much
Pacific blue my eyes
I adore you
Crimson red my heart
It adorns you
Golden sun rising
Is your loving smile
Illuminating the morning
Satin white your soul
Mesmerizing me succinctly
Sweet star of my heart
You inflame me
Sweet crystal clear liquid
Of the sparkling waterfall
Our love is constant
Inseperable oneness
Complete and pure
Mated for life
Two doves bewitched
Soft and sprinkling
Like the gentle morning dew
Our devotion is complete
And an item we are
So cool and so sure
Oh baby we know
Breathless joy and delight
Shooting star sublime
Arcing in time
Our essence combined
On angel's wings to soar
Radiant souls in harmony
Validated by heaven
Mark of true love
Unstoppable our momentum
Divine and inspired
Delicious kiss
With true intent
Seals our happiness
In myriad ways
Colossal confidence
And full assuredness
Exuding beautiful
Symbols of trust
A sacred mandate
Holy bond supreme
With an iron will
Embedded within
Wrapped in each other's arms
Nothing else matters
Except you and I
For our Committment
Is a gift from God
Another peom of deep desire and respect. Your words are pronouncing that love is a treasure when honesty is it's vehicle. I admire your strength and talent.
Susan
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Whew! You about blinded me with those colors and if that wasn't enough, your pennmanship was even more profound. Good stuff.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Your poetic gift really shine brightly here, excellent beaut of a write..
*sigh* A man who know what love is. You are truly blessed to have this kind of experience. A beautifully penned work of art.
I have tears in my eyes.
Chanti
Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Peter,
You write with love's intent. Enjoyed this very much.
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Don't know how I missed this masterpiece - pure poetic genius ... exceptional imagery!!
Robert
Susan
a joy to read...
love&light,
**Mari**
an amazing, deep love abides in this powerful write--BRAVO, dear (((friend))) and poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
:)Sandy
Peter, another colorful love poem.
Cherish your gift from God.
You are a lucky man.
Hope everything is okay.
Love
Amira
Vesna
Love Tinka
*sigh* A man who know what love is. You are truly blessed to have this kind of experience. A beautifully penned work of art.
I have tears in my eyes.
Chanti
You write with love's intent. Enjoyed this very much.
Amy
A breathtaking love poem from the deepest recesses of the heart!