Sweet reassurances of love
I whisper in your ear
Darling I love you
And forever I'll be true
Nothing else matters
Except you and I
Loving hugs and cuddles
Straight from my heart
Nose to nose nuzzles
With kisses tender and fine
Soft sighs and touches
As I soothe your aches away
Standing at your side
Comfortable and relaxed
Romantic feelings conveyed
From devoted eye to eye
Assured and positive
With one hand in your jeans
Exuding confidence and optimism
We finalized our plans
You and I sweetheart
Committment is our bond
Liberated and blessed
By heaven's holy hand
Enpowered to perform
God's sacred will and design
Hi, Peter, and pleased to meet you - a fellow Brit here on the Den! I love both the intensity and the casual ease of this write expressing sincere emotion - and especially the lines: "Romantic feelings conveyed From devoted eye to eye Assured and positive With one hand in your jeans"... bit Avril Levigne or Chrissy Hind! You must be a fairly unique chap... a poetic lawyer! You must have the analytical and inspirational in perfect balance in your psyche! Thank you for your recent visit to my pages, too. Kate x
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Reviewed on September 18, 2004
beautiful work Peter....your writing is really lovely.......ty, Dani
Peter, your romantic side is showing again! This truly is a beautiful and touching write. You always manage to bring out the tender moments from your thoughts.
Very well written Peter, and I enjoyed the read.
In the predawn hours during a solitary ride on her ranch, Montana Freeborn collides with Seth Phoenix, centaur-turned-man and the embodiment of her psychic visions.
love to put a picture to this and send it to the one
I love~~~~~
*mmmmmmm kiss kiss kiss
love&light,
**Mari**
you are a devoted romantic!!!
:)
Amy
beautiful!!!!!
LP
Lucky you, lucky her.
Pure and intense love brought into a written form.
thank you
Gina
Thanks for sharing this, Peter.
Allen
This poem exudes romanticism; insightful creativity; and great poetic talent! Congratulations, my friend!
Robert
*sigh* this is breathtaking and wonderfully written--BRAVO, poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Always the true sweet romantic, your always loving and caring poetry which is also inspiring. Thanks for sharing.
hugs and love
Elga
Very well written Peter, and I enjoyed the read.
Lisa
Love Tinka