Shared and Savored Kisses (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on December 4, 2004

Beautiful*Beautiful*Beautiful!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2004

You are blessed....

I agree (big sigh)

Lovely work Peter.......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on October 19, 2004

Peter,

I am thrilled beyond words to see all the reviews of your absolutely beautiful work. You have really endeared yourself to many here at AD with your kind and honest critiques. When you add to that the exceptional writing ability - it's an unbeatable combination.

This is the poetry of one truly in love - and the utter thrill of a simple kiss. Bravo!!!!

Missed you very much my friend!

Love,

~Rose~

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Beautiful expressions of Love Peter...I can relate to this emotion with such ease.

Allen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

I agree with Nordette!

My wife you are the inspiration
Of my heart and soul
I whisper upwards to heaven
Oh God thank you
For giving me this miracle of all

Big sigh :)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Romantic writings to a wife are even more powerful in this day of "love the one you're with." Thanks, Peter.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Matrimonial bliss! A precious thing. The lyric is like that of a song and was wondering if it had actually been written with that in mind? The sense of urgency cascades throughout the language of the last stanza and the ecstasy is tangible. Palpitating write! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Peter,

An "electrifying", superbly written poem - outstanding!!

Robert

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 18, 2004

Peter, If there was ever a man that was happy in the bonds of matrimony..it would be you.
It's great to be able to know the depth of your love.

Lisa

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Rapture describes this warmly.

Amy

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

a most wonderful poem of passion and committment ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Your romantic work is always so beautiful! Nicely done.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Peter, your love and devotion, fired by passion, for your wife warm a reader's heart.

Bravo!
Gina

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

(((peter)))

a poem to savor, again and again--wonderful write, poet! you write with love and power :) well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Mystical magical moments

You pen them most magnificently, Peter; and it truly is wonderful to read of such deep deep love and committment between a husband and wife.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

This is aflame with desire and complete contentment
in beautiful passionate love! Wondrous Peter!;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

I agree totally with Andy On this One Peter!!

Just so very beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Nothing like morning sunshine! ;-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2004

Married in soul, heart and body, a divine poem Pete, you're a lucky and happy bloke..

Long may it last..