Golden haired babe
With LA smile
Brown eyed angel
Shimmering in the Californain sun
Sexy legs and ruby red lips
You left me breathless
Addicted to your love
In the Mojave Desert
We sealed our vows
Kissed and snuggled
The whole nite through
Hand in hand
Heart to heart
We savored the taste
Of midnite love
Pacific blue
Warm waters divine
Blended our hearts
As we tasted sweet wine
Hispanic welcome
Te amor my bride
Frisco sounds
Clasp in your hair
We dined on Mexican
Castanets filled the air
Promises fulfilled
Designed for two
Californian babe
I love you true
Copyright by Peter Paton 2004
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2004
Well, this is interesting.
Is it really about your wife? Never knew this. But if, lucky you.
Excellent write.
o, this is WONDERFUL! reminds me of beach boys and a certain old lady from pasadena :) excellent write--you bring california to those who have never experienced it
Peter, they don’t call it “The Golden State” for nothing, my friend. Such a wonderful feast for the heart, mind and soul. Absolutely well-done! Thanks for sharing it. Take care and don’t forget to pack your tanning lotion… lol.
Utterly delightful poem, Peter! I just spent a month's vacation time in San Diego, California and Santa Fe, New Mexico and it was a wonderful time of fun and writing!
Yee-haa! Goooood vibrations here, Peter. I wrote two poems for my "starlet" niece's wedding this summer - but I reckon I could have written "The Golden Gate" just for you two!! Many congratulations on communicating a "love so fine" and may it's glow continue in your lives forever!! LOL Kate xx
And I love this poem of yours, Peter; especially since I have an Hispanic bride, I love the ocean, desert, and Mexican cantinas, and San Francisco is one of my all time favorite cities!
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Is it really about your wife? Never knew this. But if, lucky you.
Excellent write.
o, this is WONDERFUL! reminds me of beach boys and a certain old lady from pasadena :) excellent write--you bring california to those who have never experienced it
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
One simply MUST listen to the Beach Boys or Santana while reading this beautiful poem.
Well done!
~Rose~
lol your married to a Latina!
No wonder you are inspired Senor!
Did you ever hear that song Smooth..........Santa and Rob somebody??? Oh I cannot think of the name now........
he wrote it for his Latin wife.......
your write is loving and beautiful as always :)
pax A
This one is as "hot" as the Mojave Desert sun!! A divinely created romantic write "steaming" with compassion!!
Robert
Amelia
Love Tinka