Forbidden Paradise (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Janet Bellinger

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

lovely collaboration, Peter.

Janet

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

Beautiful done, perfect harmonie! you work togheter wonderful.
We bow in awe, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 18, 2006

I will simply concur with the thoughts of those who have written before me. Well done, you two. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 18, 2006

great collaboration you two!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Michael Wells (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2006

Where love is a forbidden dream
Where a dream is a sin
Yet she dreams
Wonderful expression of determination and the triumph of love over adversity and war
Well done, Huda & Peter
God bless - Michael

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Beautiful work you two...wonderful

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

beautiful collab ... makes the heart soar ...

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Peter, that was some collaboration. Awesome! and one, every couple who are apart, for one war or another, whether with a nation or the self, can relate to.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

I agree with everyone this is a beautiful collobration piece
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Huda and Peter,

Very nice collab; brava! bravo! Well done!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Dear Peter and Huda,
Your poem is powerful!
"...love will always prevail..." Yes, yes may love overtake war!! This may occur if the ballerina ran the world. "The hand that rocks the cradle is the hand that can run the world". "Women" are intrinsically empowered with true love and care! Love for the children; the innocents, is far greater than �More Land��the Sanskrit meaning for �War�.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful souls!
And, I love the pic!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

A timeless piece to treasure for those who's love is afar, or no longer here. Excellent write!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

The true ache of love between a soldier and his woman is one of endless beauty regardless of the outcome that war can sometime bestow. The heart allows the soldier to fly to war never knowing if they return and so often that heart os a vicitm of the same war that took the romantic heart away forever.
Susan

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

(((My most precious Peter and Huda))) dearest angels of light, this is so beautiful. Sister, shine along with my precious angel Peter. This touched my soul so deeply with each tender word.. The beauty of your words together simply radiated songs of healing to my world.. I�m as always, speechless, loves�

(((Love & Prayers, Dove )))

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Wow breathless write that you two have made that sooo captures the love between soldiers and their loved ones. Well done guys this is really good.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

love the uplifting ending of a very sad but well told story. This is why no one wins when it comes to war.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

A beautiful collaboration and just love the last stanza.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Boy I would love to hang that painting hanging on my wall, pure beauty as is this collaboration of two fine poets.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Peter,

Stunningly beautiful collaboration between two master poets; congratulations!

Read my "G o o d N e w s" :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Oh my! This is a glorious poem by two wordsmiths who have graced us with this gem and a picture that makes me want to crawl into it;-)So lush and beautiful this sweet offering, thank you both!

Love,
eT

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 16, 2006

Aaaah!! DELIGHTFUL! Beautiful collaboration and one that makes the soul sing... you had me goin, there, and the twist at the end is superb. Not so much forbidden, as thwarted, perhaps... ?? K xx