Beyond All Expectations (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

Beautiful and such sweet sentiment!
One special lady she is!
BRAVO!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Spectacular, Peter; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

for these heartfelt moments, will never come again
and we are touched, by a power we can't comprehend <---Soul food.
Wonderful poetry, with tremendous images and metaphors..

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Pure romance Peter. One of your best!
Love,
Taylor~

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

You stir the heartstrings with your romantic verse, Peter. Love abounds is all your words, that become melodeous in the reading!
Beautifully written...

Micke

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Be still my heart. You make us feel, see, hear, smell. . .
k n o w l o v e i s i n t h e a i r. Thank you, kind sir.
Thank you. 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Sir Peter the catcher of moments ...

I saw in my minds eye, you, with a butterfly net catching a most delightful moment in time. And guess what?

"oscillating within my atoms" has got to be one of the most unique images I have read in a while. What a spectacular confirmation of love for your one and only. Like fine wine flowing over the pallet.

Light and wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

This is as romantic as they come, Dear Peter!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Romantic You Beyond All Expectations...

Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

A lovely write.

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

About as captivatingly intimate and lyrically absorbing as a beautiful poem and a beautiful moment gets:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

"and you are all, that matters to me in this world"

I know these sentiments well, Peter. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

ah, nicely done

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Something happened on that beach that touched your soul.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

A true romance tribute that must melt the heart of the recipiant if she is any kind of a romantic at all. What a beautiful tribute.

Fee

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

'the tanged perfume of the seaweed, floods my being and soul'

The first scent that stirs my senses when I arrive on the Isle of Arran is the gorgeous smell of seaweed. Ah, if only that could be bottled - eaten right enough - but bottled.
This idyllic poem translated me from my London home back to the beach at Morar rather than Arran. Beautiful white sands that seem to stretch beyond the horizon. You've given me waves of imagery to surf upon, Peter. Do I exaggerate? Reading this and looking at the image - why does Jura come to mind also - supplied makes me pine for home. No I don't exaggerate.

'for these heartfelt moments, will never come again'

I hope the sentiments of this line don't ring true with me just yet.

Thanks for taking me along the shore.

Reviewed by Angel God is Love

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

This is wonderful Peter thanks for this.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Oh Peter
I agree with Jude and all the others
bravo!
pax A

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

the divine music of love, is oscillating within my atoms

And you convey it to the page very well, Peter!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Awesome...just awesome!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Oh Peter, your strength of spirit and the inner peace you gain from that is astounding. You share so much...bless you, Shine on Warrior! Love and deep respect to you as ever, Panda :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

this poem is certainly not beyond my expectations of your remarkable work and profound insight ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Peter the glorious nature of this poem is enhanced by the beauty of the picture, and the awesome way you capture the essence of the moment! You are another of the prize poets we have here at the den that consistently pen remarkable poetry ! Thank you for sharing.

Shalom!
Eileen

Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

so lovely, Peter. Mary

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Ditto Vic
;)Ch'erie

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Beautiful amalgamation of nature and love laced with romance. Victor

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Beautiful work , peter

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Enchanting!

Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Peter,

This is just breathlessly beautiful!!!!! I love every word of this!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Your last line says it all for me... lovely work Peter!

Myrna

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Ain't love grand? This is another lovely romantic poem, Peter. The feelings are right there for us to see -- you do that so well.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

That's how love captures your heart and weaves into one with hers. You are a true romantic.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

simply beautiful, Peter~

Susan

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Your heart is rare and dedicated purity Peter. I'm very proud to be a part of where you are.
This is tender and beautiful and although I can't have it in my life in the present I can feel the closeness through your pens. I feel the past then and it's good to keep warm by our memories sometimes.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Peter,

So beautiful and gracefull these romantic expressions.. Blended with nature it is truly beautiful....

Light & Peace
Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

beautiful!