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This American Dream
by Diana J Legun → (All Poetry by Diana J Legun)
Wednesday, July 5, 2023    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Fireworks and flags, jubilance and national pride have a strange new ‘sound and fury, signifying everything’.


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Sometimes an anthem can feel like a funeral march when the song once about spacious skies becomes about The Great Divide.  Being jovial feels safe and good and being a kind of Paul Revere feels like admitting truth.  Life is both.  

 

This American Dream

now becomes a scream

about the homeless

might be any of us this —

unwinding nightmare’s

serpentine line of tents there 

in back to back village living —

nothing more for loan forgiving

hand to hand about-face

with no age, no title, no race

to the top; crushed to the bottom

where comfy people forgot ‘em

once past the scene — 

the homeless camp’s obscene

gritty truthful reveal

where nothing is to steal

when nothing is much there

after officials rotely swear

oaths pledging allegiance

to better serve their regions

in this American Dream

whatever that can mean

to whole families in camps

lit by passing headlamps

lining frantic freeways

of This American Dream.

 

~~ djl July 4th, 2023

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "This American Dream"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 7, 2023
Yes, it certainly is a problem that we have here in the land of the free. The homeless are not free. They are trapped in their circumstance that most people don't really understand. Particularly if they have mental problems that push them in the street in the first place.

I believe it was the new Mayor of San Francisco or Los Angeles that proclaimed getting rid of homelessness by using underused hotels and motels. I wonder if that will work. Most homeless people need a lot more than just a place to sleep with a roof over their heads. They need lots of counseling and support so that they can either get back on their feet or at least be comfortable as they deal with their demons under expensive psychiatric care.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 6, 2023
A very sad issue that you have laid out very well here in your short succinct verses. Well done.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on July 5, 2023
Yes, JoAnne, this painting is a further-unraveled alteration of this same painting I did in 2018, with the red and blue threads working together for the big mend. I really thought it possible, but this 2023 rendition of this same painting shows how much less I imagine it probable. You are right, my parents would go beyond crestfallen to heartsick, were they here to see what has happened, it would be unrecognizably incomprehensible to them. I’m sorry for your situation, JoAnne. It is a galaxy away from the term in the last line of my poem, which has in my eyes become a misnomer. Carrying the flame anyway is all we can do until……. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on July 5, 2023
There is indentured suffering by the writer of this prayer of sorts for a reckoning by any and all, mortal and spiritual, before all exits are closed in this delirious quest for power and control our leaders and corporations are determined to maintain. Like the pied piper, we are slowly succumbing to the sheer weight of moral decay. Your thoughts here are so important for all to read. Inspired work.

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2023
Stirring true write Diana. However I see the millionaires become more billionaires like no other country in the world. My husband was wounded 44 years ago for that flag and we are "still" waiting for what we have earned and our justice is only a two tiered system of pollical preferences of the so called unwashed . Your democrat party is not your mom and dads party anymore . What we need is a change of heart


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