Life seemingly paved in an abundance of roses Threatens the presence of troublesome thorns Each step taken shackled with tenuous fear Terrified of what lies beneath the fragrant carpet
A path of uncertainty for all to embark The journey begins purely without introspection With trepidation we wind our way Through miles of flora and rolling meadows
Sweet florid scents fill the air Soothing those who breathe in her sweet bouquet Reassuring us, calming all fears Encouraging us to wander forward
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Reviews of "Path of Roses and Thorns"
Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Beautiful and deep...Good work Marco
Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2005
Wonderful write Anne!
"Threatens the presence of troublesome thorns
Each step taken shackled with tenuous fear
Terrified of what lies beneath the fragrant carpet" Excellent lines.
Excellent write, Anne. It reminds us that no matter what may be along the path ahead, we must still undergo the journey :) (Not liking your teacher this class, eh?) LOL
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
This reminds me of those poems you read that are put in booklets by Hallmark.
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"Threatens the presence of troublesome thorns
Each step taken shackled with tenuous fear
Terrified of what lies beneath the fragrant carpet" Excellent lines.
i agree with those here it's uplifting!!!
great job!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
enjoyed your sharing tonight--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)