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Autumn
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autumn leaves dancing


float softly on the quickening breeze,


tiny ribbons of scarlet and gold


drift slowly down..


rustling a plaintive song of farewell


 


the sighing wind


combs it's chilly fingers


through the sleepy woods


whispering it's ancient song


 


across pale blue skies


bleached of summers bright hue


geese fly...loosed like arrows from a hundred quivers


singing their mournful tune


 


as the outflung limbs of the massy trees


reach for the last precious moments of warmth


from summers fading light..


cool tendrils of woodsmoke and mist


enfold the woods...


in autumns heart


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 Reviews of "Autumn"
Reviewed by S. Holland (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2003
Hi Candida:

I especially like this phrase: "the sighing wind combs it's chilly fingers through the sleepy woods." I love personification. The most imaginative writers are very good at this. It is the best way to help a reader feel, see, taste, smell and hear.

Reviewed by R. Steven Reynolds
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Very good Miss Candy, almost makes me wish i had leaves to rake...

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
An excellent exploration into nature.
great images ...
Shy

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Excellent! Candida, this is as good as it gets...lovely work...makes me homesick for Ohio.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Very vivid imagery, excellent portrayal of Autumn. ~ZZ~

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Absolutely beautiful and gorgeous poem.
Captivating and admireable.

Greetings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
A gorgeous piece! I like autumn.

~Joseph

Reviewed on September 13, 2003
What a treat, this poem! Makes me wanna rake 'em and jump in 'em like when I did when I was a kid (centuries ago! LOL!).

Jules :)

Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Absolutely beautiful, I love Autumn so much, you captured this so well in this wonderful poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
This is a glorious Autumnal poem the imagery is a joy to read!

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
wow this is great... I loved the part about the geese and after reading that I fell for the woodsmoke.. well hells bells I guess I love the whole dang thing... lol

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Such a pleasure to read. Wonderful imagery

Reviewed by Michael Emery (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
nice

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Very vivid in imagery, and peaceful to the mind. Great write Candida. Lisa


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