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The Fixture
by Candida L Eittreim → (All Poetry by Candida L Eittreim)
  
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She wonders



If he ever notices…



Her reality





When donning freshly cleaned clothes,



Or slipping between cool silken sheets at night



He takes her with the careless enthusiasm.



of a schoolboy…



or a john







She wonders if he ever thinks…



Of her…



At all.









She watches him stride blindly off to his world



Of elegant women and graceless buildings,



In his crisp cotton shirts,



And gently knotted ties.







At the end of the day..



He returns



Silent and aloof



His eyes sliding round her



As he goes to his den and quietly shuts the door.









And she wonders ...



if her warranty has expired….






Candida Eittreim

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 Reviews of "The Fixture"
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Great lines. The begining as well as the ending captivate. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on February 19, 2004
This was very well done you can feel the sadness....

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
touching and thoughtful...i think i'll go hug my wife.

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
lovely

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
awesomely poignant. -- Jeff

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
enjoyed reading this sad yet lovely poem ...

Reviewed on February 7, 2004
Oh my, so powerful and excellently written, I feel the deep sadness in this one, outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2004
This is so sad and yet beautiful...
relfections in the verses.....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2004
Sad and beautiful capture of this emotion!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 7, 2004
This gives one the feeling of an echoing emptiness. Wonderful work. Lisa


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