E x a c t l y the right amount of words. . .right WORDS. Write ON!! 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Alya Landry (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2006
I read you bio and was somewhat interested in knowing what kind of writer you were...this piece was ok, but I need to see a little more depth to get a good feel.
Sometimes "off the cuff" stuff is the best. You show that here, Iva. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2005
Profound and all that jive. Actually it isn't jive but more lettin' it all hang out, as they are wont to say. Whoever the hell "they" are. Oh, I forgot, I used to know they. Left they and never went back. Loved your poem.
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
Shirine McVey discovers that twenty years of her life have elapsed since she went to sleep in a hotel room in El Paso, Texas. And worse, she is married to a man she doesn't know.
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This is music to the soul, this flying melody. BRAVA! Yes. I love how it makes me feel.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Off the cuff often works best, Iva. You proved that here.
Gina
Karen
God bless,
Sandie.