Dew beneath her feet upon grass so fresh and sweet
Air around her moist and cool
Why had she been a fool?
Swinging round hair unbound
Arms lifted high above she freed herself from love
Twirling in mid air she danced light and fair
Her heart unburdened in free fall she answered destiny's call
The winds gave her wings to fly where eternity springs where life's joys become norm --
and cast her straight into a thunderstorm.
copyright 2004 RDPounds
Roger and Birgit
Nicely done!
Chuckie
Lovely
Peter
Robert
Wise words: "Check the emotional weather report before dancing in the rain."
Cool read. . .blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
Safi
enjoyed much
Excellent write
William
Does dance really free us from love? I'll try it out and let you know.
Perfect one, Gina.
Carmen :-)
I really like this one, reminds me of someone. ;)
JC xoxoxo
An enjoyable and inspiring creation.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I Long For Times I Used Go To West View Dance Land In Pittsburgh,i.e. There's No Easier Better Containing Peace Of Mind_ And, You Bet_
I'd Met/Lost Some Cleanest,Kindest,Intelligent,Beautiful Girls Who Wanted Nothing More Than To Dance Night Away With Me,i.e. It Brings Tears!
TRASK
Love Tinka
Reindeer
Sandie May Angel :o)
Ty for this treat Gina,,,,
hugs
LP
to spice it Gina!Wonderful poem,electrifying ending!;-)