The Light Of Dawn (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

What a tragic masterpiece. It has everything a romance longs for.

Reviewed on August 19, 2007

You always write an outstanding story that keeps us on the edge of our seats. Thanks for sharing.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Brings to light the reality of cyber relationships. This poem was carefully thought out - a real tear jerker, but back where things need to be in The Light of Dawn - I prefer your more country tunes like There's a Tear in my Beer Hank Williams style - when love was in a realtime tavern and heartbreak was in Elvis' hotel! Good quill, Fee...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Oh Sweetpea! This went straight to my heart and gave it a painful kick! You are a master poet, no matter what you choose to write, it is always AWESOME! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Beautiful and sad, Darlin. But what a heartwarming picture, given that so many seem to diss the reality of friendships that exist purely in cyberspace. But it IS sobering how time can pass by until it is just toooooooo late to make the meeting actual. On the one hand, this is heartening in the sense that cyber friendships can be mutually sustained almost like airplants - purely on the "air time" that is shared together intermittantly, but knowing the emotional roots go far deeper. On the other hand, perhaps THAT is the way that many face-to-face meetings get delayed... because weeks, months, years can just keep rolling by without any discernible change in the habitual workings of the friendship. I am comforted to know that Dawn did at least get to say a very real "hello/goodbye". That makes the whole thing very, VERY real. Makes me yearn to hurry up and plan my transatlantic sojourn... within the next ten years or so!! :)) Bless you, Felix. I can sense this tragic tale has touched you deeply. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Many people do not truly understand the bonds we do make here in cyberspace. A wonderful write about finding what was good in any relationship and have that be your guiding light. Well done. Lady J

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

OMG this is such a beautiful cyber story....geeee...now I am crying...knowing it could happen to so many people even here on AD!!

Stay safe....and take care!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Hearbreakingly sad but beautifully and tenderly written. Only a man with a heart as big as yours could write such a poignant poem.
A big hug for you Fee.
Marcia

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

A bitter-sweet ode, eloquently done Fee, Ty, Panda

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Powerful yet so beautiful, Fee; very nice! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

(((Fee))),

POWERFULLY poignant, with a life lesson to transcend death: what more can we ask? Beautifully penned, my (((friend))).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Just a little clarification...this is a true story and Dawn is a real person, and I asked her to let me share this as an example that the end of Physical love, whether by death, health or break up, is not the end of love that dwells down deep in the heart, that can never be erased...Thank you again Dawn.

fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Fee, what a very sad, but beautiful story. Dawn is full of light, and she gave Ted some of that for the years they spoke. He was a very happy man when he passed. She knows this and it does give her comfort.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Oh, that's so sad! But at least she gave him happiness in Cyberspace. Could be all he could handle, anyway. Got the neat outline of a short story here, Felix.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Such a sad story Felix and too often this happens and our life feels as though it will be empty forever more. You have a big heart and I hope all is well for Dawn.
Love ya Cuz XOXO,
Rose

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

wow-well written and so very sad-what a trooper dawn is

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

A beautifully tender but sad story of love dear cuz.

Love you
Selena

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

A tale of love on the internet interrupted by death.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

I hope, wish, want, demand that destiny gives Dawn another light, stronger enough to dissipate the shadows of yesterday.
A painful poem within the happy and hopeful words.
Georg

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Awww Tedder, I only went offline for a moment matey, you don't have to kark it on me....
brb means that...
Oh you ole softy, here's a hug
from yer sweet cherrypie mmmmwwaahhh

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Heartfelt sad story...Hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

This is a sad story, I only hope it's not real, for such heart ache is hard to bear. Victor