Harbor Front Goodbye
I feel the cold wind blowing off the harbor
As I pull up my tough guy collar, play my part
Even though you just wiped your misty eyes
Leaving teardrops on the coat sleeve of my heart
Look at the water,
the passing ships,
even the seagulls in the sky
Anywhere else around
but your retreating back
or I know I’ll start to cry
The clouds cover up the lover’s harvest moon
As if they have heard her words and sympathize
No they’ll not let the stars add insult to injury
And even the wind settles down to breezy sighs
A foghorn wails
A bell buoy replies
Everything seems the same
I steal a glance
At her retreating back
I guess I lost love’s game
Clutched in my hand I feel a diamond promise
Almost breaking skin I hold so tight
Then I toss that ring, that cheating thing
And lay to rest the love I lost that night
Sweets--RaeLynn
Love Tinka
Love you
Selena
Saying goodby to the last harbor is like receiving a Dear John letter.
Very good!!!
Georg
Leaving teardrops on the coat sleeve of my heart"-wow-these words are used so well--your gift is a beautiful one as you have wov3n these words around a very sad, but powerful experience
Beautifully written expression of ones feelings
The page is filled with deep emotions and I detected
Your tone sad as your words are soft and tender
I felt your lonely feelings !!
Beautifully written piece on ones thoughts
Love Peace and many many hugssss to you.....Morning Star
Lacy Annie
Regis
Walt
Love ya Cuz XOXO, Rose
Thanks,
Dan
Poignantly penned, one feels the author wants to be anywhere but standing at the harbor, telling his loved one goodbye: the readers feel his pain. Excellent.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(