Crayola Coloured Thoughts
By: Fee
I seen the coloured thoughts you had of me
Some in Technicolor shades of burgundy
You wondered if when I thought of you
Was it in black and white or Crayola blue?
Orange and red hues of snuggle times
Greens and pinks for nursery rhymes
Rainbow thoughts that dance around
Our feet just will not touch the ground
I was the moon in your rear-view mirror
Always close but couldn’t get nearer
Comforting though my soft white glow
Till morning gold said the moon must go
I played with you in snowflake kisses
White and pure like all good wishes
You read my words in hot passion red
Little belly tingles rising pink up to your head
Now I carefully fold my multi coloured page
With one longing satisfied sigh I disengage
Pack my Crayola coloured dreams away
I hope they helped brighten up a dreary day
Love you cuz
Selena
Let me just say, that there is no need to be sorry for yesterday's sad one. Never apologize for tears!
I love this one here a lot! I get pictures from my two nieces in Germany all the time, and they are colored crayon creations. I always hang them on my fridge until I get the next one in the mail and I'll keep em forever. Though I'm "just an aunt" their love for me is felt over the tousands of miles which sepperate me from them.
Truly lovely work,
Becca~
you are such a good poet, with an amazing talent for rhyme and subject matter, this is so creative Fee, I just loved it!! anita :)
God bless you. Kathy
Love the poem and little fingers that are still a part of you.
Love,
Susan
excellent Felix...
John
w o n d e r f u l. Like. . .B R A V O !!!!! <3 Pee;) <3
Sanja xo
You sure know how to use those crayons! I find this piece to be so fresh and innocent, like from your inner child.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Nice format though I had to highlight the yellow verse to read it. The colors themselves conveyed the passion in this write.
--RaeLynn
Sweet warm friendly and very passionate
A true romantic!!!
Beautiful coloured thoughts!!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star
Georg
This is truly sweet !
Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love ya face Cuz XOXO , Rose