I absolutely love the last two lines of this piece.. just lovely. Myrna

Darlin cuz I wish my man could write romance as you do, your words are always so tender,soothing and inviting. But then again not many men do. With the exception to the men on the den of course.

Love you Cuz,
Selena

In the tender spots of hide and seek
The soothe the painful dreams of past

This is a fine way of expressing your theme, Fee. I know of such places. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

You are a very gentle soul - this is very evident from your most sacred, sweet, romantic writes. I love the flow, keep em' comin'!

Sanja xo

Fee--this is a beautiful piece of longing I think everyone does relate to. The hope to find that special person who can knock down those walls we all build.
Funny, makes me think of someone massaging my shoulders. It is truly relaxing.
Sweets--RaeLynn

Beautiful piece, Fee!

Maybe because this touches my heart in a special place, I think this is your best'est poem. The beauty of love.

Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday dear Fee, Happy Birthday to you! Kathy

If Indeed!
Beautiful sentiments Fee, and HAPPY B DAY again. Kick up yer heels matey and pluck that geeetar well into the night.
Hugszzz xxxxx Cherrypie

I could take you up on this one Fee.
Great write you have here that reaches right into the blindside of the heart.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Amazing how a guy like you can have such a tender heart...
Simply beautiful.. and yes - happy Birthday Fee~

WHAT A BIRTHDAY POEM AND WHAT A BIRTHDAY SMOOCH!! :)) b e a u t i f u l!!! And you should be jolly well smouldering, with all them candles on your cake standing to attention! HAVE A GREAT TIME OF IT, DARLIN, AND don't get crumbs between the sheets... it's they wot makes for painful but sticky sweet dreams! Love, Kate xx

Fee this is stunning, so emotive. Happy birthday Dear Heart and many more to come.

One would need to be their fearless selves or perhaps the last great act of their desperation to wonder into that secret place and to be that first to ask.

Felix you touched my heart with this write, this is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Dear Felix,

This poem speaks of true intimacy. Your loving heart shines, my friend.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

very touching poem,,, and a Big Happy Birthday!!!!
:)Christine

Very good write, enjoyed reading.

Cheers,
Dan

This poem is serene and filled with BEAUTY!
WOW Fee, that place is well hidden from some, I would want you to search a little longer to find it!
What an elegantly written deep profound poem that I enjoyed!
and REALLY, it's your BIRTHDAY!
WEll Country boy, HAPPY BIRTHDAY and may the sun shine in your heart
and give your day a jump start!!!
Have a Wonderful HAPPY! Day! as you write away!
And Bless us today!
Much love and Warm Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
Hope! you have many sweet surprises to touch your soul TODAY and EVERYDAY!
WE have been blessed by your "BIRTh" Day!
And... WOW! Do hold that promise of tomorrow's light so we can escape bewilderment.
UNCONDITIONAL! You express it GRAND!

Happy happy happy
Birthday birthday birthday...

the BIRTHDAY BIRD is out! :)

Kick up some ash and blow into the orange...Yup. that's my motto!
Great pen, Fee...
Party up!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Beautifully penned, Fee, well done - a slow burn of love!

Oh, BTW, a little birdie told me today is your birthday -

Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to youu
Happy Birth - daaaaaaay, dear Feeeeeeeeeeeee
Happy Birthdayyy toooo youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!

*gaspgasp think I popped a lung* worth it, though - may it be your best!!

((((((HUGS)))))) and love, Karla.

Soothing and mellow, an easing into love, that is what this poem is. ~ Sara

Excelling writing sweet man,enjoyed..Hugssss...Are you having trouble with AD I posted a poem but know one knew about it?stay safe and well OK...Hugsssssssss

Fee,

Your poem gives new meaning to a life being an open book.Only gentleness and caring can soothe the smouldering flames. Great write and perfect accomplishment. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Excellent writing, Fee; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

What happened to #48 as well as #17? Both our drivers didn't have a good Daytona 500...oh, well; the NASCAR season's still young....We'll see.... :)

Fee, you romantic you!!! so you have untold smoldering secrets in that secret place of yours (and you are asking us to tell ours?)
Do hold that promise of tomorrow's light so we can escape bewilderment.
Very inspirational.

Georg

Beautiful flow of words, about the acceptance of others and more importantly...ourselves.

sensitive to anothers need...this was nice

Fee,
I think this type of acceptance is particularly moving when it occurs. A part of us we considered ugly or unconventional is suddenly beautiful, making us feel one step closer to whole. An elegant write with profound meaning. Love and Hugs~
Sheila

a very lovely poem-tender and beautifully stated