Thoughts of You, When You and I Were We (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 11, 2008

WOW! This is AWESOME and Touching all rolled into ONE! Sweetie!
So much I loved here, your tender heart speaking out bluntly! Your love in a strong way, and so much more my great friend, I am proud to have in my heart daily!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

STay Positive!
Stay STrong!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Beautiful and romantic. You have expressed what every woman wants to hear.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Fee...the words in this poem its what every woman loves to hear
you are a romantic at heart
I love the delicate tone and tenderness
Absolutely Beautiful!!
Peace Love and Hugsssss...Morning star

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Fee,
There's such a tender feel to this poem. The first line uses the word "compassion" and I feel that sentiment throughout this piece. You are a gifted writer! Keep them coming for all to enjoy! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Thinking back in time can sometimes be oh so painful, but sometimes we find solace. What once was, is no more and never can be again and so we move forward never quite forgetting....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Kind of melancholy but expressed so well. The pic is great

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Very touching, especially this stanza:
"I�ll hear your side of the story
Freely offer advice if you request
I�ll stroke the pain of past away
At least I�ll try to do my best"

Axilea

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Oh Fee this is as mellow and sweet as a good cappuchino! Beautiful

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

what an incredibly romantic write! every womans dream man!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Such a beautiful heartwarming piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Very beautiful, Fee!

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Love the title, love the poem. Bravo dear Fee.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

eager, endearing, longing, lovely verses.....

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Forever never will be long enough when this kind of feelings are in your heart...

Georg

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

A wonderful good morning.
Aren't fantasies just the best? At least we can control the outcome.
I'm feeling a touch of bittersweet. But the bitter makes the sweet just so much sweeter.
This gives such a warm fuzzy feel.
Sweets--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Good Morning Fee,
I Love This Poetic Express You Have Written
At First Capture Of Reading---> SIGhhhhhhhh The Romantic Heart Of Your Verses.....
Then a huge smile because the rest of the write is also so relatable & is for many I am sure.
"I�ll giggle when you�re naughty

I�ll understand when you are bad"
Shhhhhhh.......lol
What A Loving Heart You Have & Is In Your Poetry
But Indeed Letting Go of A Fantasy Is Rather Hard to Do.
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Beautifully open and honest words of caring. Enough to drive a woman insane with longing to bond with such intensity, at moments try and climb through the screen to reach more than a pen, only to find completion happens in fantasy and not reality. To some the fantasy fulfills. To others it just makes you want reality that much more. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with such emotion this day. Deborah:)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Truly passionate, and truly good, my friend.

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Very touching, amazingly emotional piece.
Beautiful, Fee!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Terrific!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Very beautiful writing Fee,so touching..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugsss

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Felix you keep touching our hearts with your words, This is beautiful and is a great memory of a one time in my past. Thank you for touching my heart this morning.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Absolutely beautiful! This is a very emotional write - I can feel the longing there - how lucky to be a we with you, shame that never stayed true. Silly girl, indeed!

Sanja xo