Afterglow (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

The afterglow of intimate entwinement

Like a living lover’s poem of lusty fire

My fingers linger on your satin skin

I swear I hear a sweet Angel’s choir

Teardrops soaked up in your hair

At the beauty of this precious gift

You could not have offered more

Then to let my feelings openly drift

Body parts aglow and lover’s smile

Spun wrinkled sheets a loves cocoon

Sweet kisses on eyelids, nose and lips

Like night stars that court the moon

Sleep now comes to wake our dreams

Where we shall deem to wander free

‘til morn to make love on the clouds

This is the way love ought to be…

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on August 18, 2012

Keep that love going on! You wear it well! No wonder you haven't been writing lately!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Another fantastic write from a fantastic writer and no Felix it isn't the flu, this is who you are. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

I agree. This is the only way love can be and YES!!! It's one heck of an experience.

Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

wow--some kind of fever!!!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Fever's seem to ignite your passion...You are hot in more ways than one!
Nicely done, Fee,
Peace, love and light
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Fee,
A creative mix of nature and romance! Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Very mystical,,, Love this,, and afterglow fits perfectly.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Very romantic Fee! You should fever more often as it seems to have brought out quite the poem! he he he Cheers, Deborah

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

You are such a romantic! I am tracking you!!!! This is most tender and beautiful."...Sweet kisses on eyelids, nose and lips

Like night stars that court the moon"

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Note: Axilea and Charlie, apologies for my case of mistaken identity in your Axilea's last write. Please forgive.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Holy smokes, Fee
Of course I want you to feel better, but if the flu is what it takes... I love this! And this photo... I wished I had her waiste line... *sigh**
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Fee,
There Is No Doubts!
That is The Way Love Is!!!
Sighhhh Love The Poem
& Savoring The Photograph!
Love & Hugs
& clear soup & clear broths & garoraide (for your electrolites) clear pop, no apple juice, no orange juice unless you water it down 50/50
& definetly no milk
lots of jello!!
Sherberts are ok too-
GET WELL!!!
Love & Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Fee, the picture...is that your covered head in the foreground you naughty boy?
After all, after reading your poem I need to make a doubletake, OMG! that's Fee! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Gorgeous...and that last line sums it all up perfectly!

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2008

Absolutely ravishing - I can feel the sweat beading on the small of my back as we speak. You have pushed the perverbial buttons again. Thanks for the lift - long trip, needed the fantasy.

Much luv,
Sanja xoxo