Young and Free (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Nothing like young love's sweet anticipation. You penned it expertly! Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

I love this, Fee. You've captured those days of holding hands with anticipation. Great imagery, too! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

OH the angst of being young and not having what you need close at hand to take the situation more firmly in hand. Yearning, teasing, tensing. Excellent passion. Liz

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Oh Golly Gee... I Wished I Was Allowed To Date.....
Love This Poem Fee, as usual Master Poet! :)
Tender Years & Newly Discovering Young Love
Very Lovely Poem
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Juicy Fruit gum kisses ahh I remember those where
Good old days of our youth
This are some beautiful sweet memories
A beautiful sweet write!!
Peace Love and Hugesss.....Morning star

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Moody's Field and those Juicy Fruit Gum kisses... totally unbeatable in terms of easily aroused and unquenchable fires... whatever happened to them??!! Reckon it must have been you, Darlin, setting my hay barn on fire when I was 10... but my oh my, the blaze was so pretty - at least, I thought so! :)) LOVE this, as you can imagine. Kountry Kate xx

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Passionate and so romantic, yes, young love is butterscotch sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

"Juicy fruit kisses." That one made me smile!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Fee you brought this scene and all its emotions alive to your readers. Wonderful work.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Aah, when we were young...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Wonderful write, Fee; bravo! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Fee,

Ah Yes. I remember needing many a cold shower. Those Juicy Fruit Kisses were the best. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

A bunch of thanks Fee, for dragging me back to better days and better memories from this rotten everyday's calamities.
A romantic like you can be the one forbidden tomorrow.

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Beautiful memories of the way things were. Thank you for sharing your great words with us.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Ted Glines MSW

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

Ah, those brief eternities, Fee. Loves that would never die. Grandparents who were forever. School would never end. Life was an eternal today. Now we look back and see those so-brief moments. I really like this one, Fee :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

Beautiful sweet writing of a time that will always live in the heart and memory.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

Ah yes Clover....Amazing plant that stuff..has a strange effect on humans... devastating on cows though LOL...
Brought a smile to this face today, ty Fee, Hugzz Cherrypie

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

Thanks, Fee, for reminding us that we were once that
young and free. - gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

so very sweet!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

BEAUTIFUL, Fee, absolutely beautiful! Captured perfectly!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

This poem makes me want to be young and in love once again. Lovely imagery!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

super last line - it's 3am Fee, just got home - 'juicy fruit kisses'! lol - thanks for the read xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

Very nice, Fee, I can relate to those youthful days of tender nights and fires burning till you wanted to burst at the seams...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

I'm sorry I've been away to miss your exciting poems Fee. This uis one of the best you've written and I think others will identify with "Incubating desires". Wow again! love,
Susan

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

succulent and engulfing ...

By: Fee

Along the train tracks where we walked