Artificial Love Night (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Well done, Fee. I think. Never cared much for those
hot damn, thank you ma'am, trysts. But its better than
a martini lunch. -gene.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on July 21, 2008

OH those darn kids. You just can't get anything done. Trying to sneak a little and they are full of it. Liz

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on July 18, 2008

Fee
I love this one. You captured the moment so well. A terrible thing when a couple can't seem to find that right moment to be together, alone...You know what I mean. Then, when it arrives, well the door bell rings, or the phone. Even the kids, who had somewhere else to be decide to come home. I just love it when they say, whats up? Lol...

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 16, 2008

hahahaha, you know this too well, I sure can relate to

"children�s laughter

outside the glass

just doesn�t fit

orgasmic state

and muffled scream

on tender neck

their bedeviled

clandestine date"

Love it! :-)

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

Gotta love those "Afternoon Delights" ;) Sensual, passionate poem, Fee ... hugs

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

LOL:) A quick stolen moment creates a rush like no other. You capture that "quick" feeling with burst-like imagery throughout. Way to write, Fee. Love and Hugs.
Sheila

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

You betcha!
If this (rodeo) trailer's rockin', don't bother knockin'...
Love the pic!
Love you, too.
R~

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

I Love That Photo Fee
and the buffet of lovers in this delishious afternoon meal to satisfy them hungry appetites..
Now This Is A Fine Lunch Hour Indeed
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

This pict. drives me NUTS! for nuts and something good and tasty!
I love this erotic short loving (secret daytime sexy time) Poem!
I want moreeeee... I wrote a short story today, based on the same premise when I finish! That is!I Love also your word choosing and your style of writing this out!
I love these times...
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and more, Love Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

I want to know the address of that quick eatery, lunch...dinner...breakfast...you name it and I will lick the plate!

Georg

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Reminds me of a country song from the 70's titled "Love in the afternoon" or something like that. Nice write.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

i love it!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

What a lunch hour Fee!!!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Nice Fee, It's been a while for this for me though...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Great write; excellent word choices - you've set the mood perfectly.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

Nawwwwwwty but nice :)
Hugs Cherrypie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 14, 2008

An artificial love night in the middle of the afternoon, oh yes we've been there a few times. Fantastic times and great write Cuz. thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose