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Write For You Not Me
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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I have heard so many people complaining about not getting reviews or not getting enough reviews and wondering why etc. "Why" doesn't really matter as much as why do you need reviews. If people read and leave you a compliment that is nice, if they find errors and faults and make suggestions that is nice too, but if they dont' why fret it...write for yourself first and that is all that matters, that you like and believe in your own work...

PS: If I get no reviews on this I will understand. LOL

 

 

Write For You Not Me…

By: Fee

Write true from your heart

Write what no one has seen

Write from your hiding place

Where no one has been

Write what makes you happy

Write what makes you sad

Write with true conviction

Even when you feel bad

Write what turns you on

Write what turns you off

Writer inane and write silly

Even if some may scoff

Write teardrops and sadness

Write of cruelty and pain

Write the things on your mind

When you think you’re insane

Write of romance and love

Write erotica with a twist

Write of young innocent love

Like the first time you kissed

Write of things in the future

Write of the things in the past

Writer of moments so fleeting

That you thought would last

Write a sweet summer sonnet

Write a simple short haiku

Write a funny fine limerick

As long as you write it for you…

 


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Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
What a great poem! It's a keeper!

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Bravo, Fee! This is very inspiring to us all! Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on August 6, 2008
I don't think you left anything out. A great reminder WHY we write!
Lovely!
Cheers,
R~

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
Fee,
This poem reminds me of why I write; how it comes from the heart & soul. However, I love sharing my work. I know not everyone will like my stuff, but sharing it makes me feel lucky. I feel even more fortunate when I can read other people's books, poems, and short stories. Together...we adventure! I like this poem. It had the potential to become predictable in the telling but you threw in unexpected changes along the way. The mark of a talented writer! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
In September it will be one year since I joined the Den,, I just feel so lucky to have met such wonderful souls that have inspired me in so many ways,,, I truly could give everybody a hug.
Love, Christine

Reviewed on August 4, 2008
YOU GOT THAT RIGHT! When someones's likes my style of what I've
written, to be it's a special TREAT, I wasn't expecting1
This is a treasure to savor SWEET FEE!
Thanks for sharing this!
I write for me, are you kidding, I write so many- some couldn't and wouldn't be able to KEEP UP! NOt with my diffent genres! I write what I know, I write what I feel, I write about the day and what comes into ME! as you do see... and YOU KNOW WHAT, I wish I did get critical comments, on something I write! So I can learn from something, style, form, structure, Puniation ( yea, that) lol - Anything, so I can GROWWWwwwwwwwwww!
WRITE ON!

Much LOVE and Many Big Hugs, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExoooo
STay Positive! Pssss... By the way, The structure in this poem, Is Sweetly done to a rare perfected STeak with A-!. Hey..that was good! :)

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
You are so very wise! Poets are like snowflakes, all are different and beautiful and all have a different message to share. I always write for me and if a reader enjoys what I write, that's a bonus. HUGS! SC

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
Boy, as you well know, I can relate to this so well.
I often will not post poems FOR FEAR of people's reactions.
I write solely for me and sometimes I overcome my fears enough to share.
Many times my best work is the most intimate look into my soul.
Something I am not real comfortable sharing.
I love your outlook and even validation.
Sweets--RaeLynn

Reviewed by karen beecher (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
I agree with part of what you said. First I think that the writer should review themselves in their mind, and if it isn't something that they think that others would like then maybe rewrite or just don't put it on the den. I don't review much, but this one time I think you should think it over. If you didn't put it on the den then no one would be able to read it or review it. If everyone liked the same thing it would be a dull world. As long as you are paying for it then write what you want and others should do the same, review or not. Some people are just whinny butts anyway.

Reviewed on August 4, 2008
The best advice a writer could give or get. If we write for others we will soon lay the pen down.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
write for yourself first and that is all that matters, that you like and believe in your own work...

How so very true.

Reviewed on August 4, 2008
Good Morning Fee....
Thats Bizzare to me that someone would complain about not recieving quantity of reviews.
Alot of readers don't like to comment, or leave it in public view & just rather send PM's.
Or maybe don't like what they read & don't wish to say "Hey that really sucked" or "HUH? What was that?" lol
...shhhh....I won't mention my sucky ones & my questionables ;)
Encouragement may come in small packages :)But a little is better than nothing (PMA)
Face life with postivivity
PMA All the Way (Positive Mental Attitude)
I have a sayin & I think it might apply here
Quality Is Number One Over Quantity Anyday!!!
(Unless Its Dead Presidents or Chief Justice Salmon P. Chase
with an additional Pres. Woodrow Wilson here & there?....sigh :)

Besides people are very diverse in their preferences. Some may love one genre & not another, and on & on & on it goes...
Besides all that being said, some people are just down right Loveable & Popular, I have seen some pages that blow me away with a huge long scroll of reviews...WOW!! :)
Much Love & Inspiration To You Always
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
Fee,

This applies to anything you do in life. Self-Satisfaction is the best compliment one can receive. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 4, 2008
This is so wise, Fee, for we should first write for ourseleves...the rest is the icing on the cake!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
You pose tough thoughts here. One writes from their heart, soul and mind, but isn't it in the sharing of ideas, the reaching out to others that pleasure is derived? A sort of kinship, if you will.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
Oh! but I don't agree. Perhaps years ago, I would have agreed with this.

It depends whether you're writing for fun, or whether you're writing to become an author. If you're writing to become an author, then you need readers and readers' response.

It's easy to mumble jumble to oneself all day long, and then write them out as fast as machine gun bullets as if to validate to oneself that the thoughts are there. Some people do that a lot all day.

Hope I didn't offend anyone, but I find this to be true.

Sandie May :o)


Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
You're a wise one - an old soul - reminding us that validation from without is nothing but for the integrity and truth we carry within.

Reviewed on August 3, 2008
Even though you like Jimmy Johnson ... LOL I'll read and review. Love what your pen has to say; you're multitalented; you have variety, while *I* get stuck in the Storm Zone. LOL It seems that is all I know: have decided if no one reviews, who gives a rip. If no one reads, who cares? I. Love. To. Write! Well done, Fee.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 3, 2008
I worry about reviews myself, especially on my stories vs. my poems, but at least I'm getting read/reviewed. I should leave it at that. Good message in this, Fee; bravo!

No, I am NOT mad at you; could NEVER be mad at you, even though you DO like Jimmie Johnson! GRRRRR!! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
Thank you Felix, your words speak the truth, we write for us first and if they touch someone else, Great. Excellent write you share with us for us.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose


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